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Can you please review my essay:A decision that has changed my life
Good afternoon :) Here are my thoughts: "Everyone has made a decision that has changed... »»
1
TMcGee
Nov 21, 08, 12:07pm
EF_Team5
Nov 21, 08, 04:30pm
Graduate Essay-Why do we need a Semiotic Methodology of Theatre? UNFINISHED
Good afternoon :) As this is not within my area of expertise, I have made comments... »»
1
carlajayne
Nov 21, 08, 08:36am
EF_Team5
Nov 21, 08, 04:15pm
Realism Essay - the readers choice
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michaelfrye1970
Nov 20, 08, 05:48am
EF_Team5
Nov 21, 08, 02:49pm
What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and the strange
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1
missy7187
Nov 20, 08, 11:46am
EF_Team5
Nov 20, 08, 05:02pm
Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.
Good afternoon :) Here are my thoughts: "Have you ever in your life got everything... »»
1
sadie0910
Nov 20, 08, 09:56am
EF_Team5
Nov 20, 08, 04:55pm
Essay about bad effects of the internet on students
Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet."... »»
1
je2ks2
Nov 20, 08, 07:59am
EF_Team5
Nov 20, 08, 04:24pm
Essay about "Better communication types"
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3
je2ks2
Nov 16, 08, 08:33am
EF_Team5
Nov 20, 08, 03:58pm
Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:
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3
tonydengcnu
Nov 19, 08, 04:19pm
EF_Team5
Nov 20, 08, 03:56pm
The Freedom to Choose Death(PLEASE EDIT MY ESSAY)
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1
search4gk
Nov 19, 08, 01:00pm
EF_Team5
Nov 19, 08, 08:15pm
research essay on novel "monkey beach"
As I don't know what the prompt/assignment is, it is hard for me to say. It seems... »»
3
alip
Nov 18, 08, 02:06am
EF_Team5
Nov 19, 08, 04:26pm
Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty
Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what... »»
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scash
Jun 6, 07, 05:04am
Lex
Nov 19, 08, 01:37pm
Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me
thanks for your help, Gloria. tony »»
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tonydengcnu
Nov 18, 08, 07:19am
tonydengcnu
Nov 19, 08, 12:08am
Taking action against moral injustice - English Essay Gr. 12 Level
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Geist
Nov 17, 08, 11:34pm
EF_Team5
Nov 18, 08, 07:03pm
Persuasive Essay Abu Graib Prison Camp-Need Help
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1
DDOWNS4
Nov 18, 08, 12:43pm
EF_Team5
Nov 18, 08, 06:55pm
People have different job expectations for jobs - essay help
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layaili
Nov 17, 08, 05:41pm
EF_Team5
Nov 18, 08, 04:34pm
Creative Writing - help needs to be proof read & doesn't quite sound right
I see. I've edited the first section and then made some general comments in regards to the... »»
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missfilan
Nov 12, 08, 01:09am
EF_Team5
Nov 17, 08, 07:32pm
Essay on the importance of writing - NEED FEEDBACK PLEASE
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d4v1d90
Nov 17, 08, 02:25am
EF_Team5
Nov 17, 08, 05:57pm
Studying at traditional schools or via computer or TV
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je2ks2
Nov 16, 08, 07:22am
EF_Team5
Nov 16, 08, 07:21pm
some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for..
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Asselya
Nov 13, 08, 12:28pm
EF_Team5
Nov 16, 08, 05:59pm
Nurture strongly influences early human development.
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1
dude91
Nov 16, 08, 03:20am
EF_Team5
Nov 16, 08, 05:30pm
Why do you think people attend college or university?
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franklamparden
Nov 15, 08, 08:18am
EF_Team5
Nov 15, 08, 11:52pm
Essay: the best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide
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Asselya
Nov 13, 08, 09:58am
EF_Team5
Nov 14, 08, 04:29pm
it is better for children to grow in the countryside than in a big city
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Asselya
Nov 13, 08, 10:58am
EF_Team5
Nov 14, 08, 04:28pm
Traffic and housing problems can be solved by decentralisation.Agree or not
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layaili
Nov 13, 08, 03:35am
EF_Team5
Nov 14, 08, 04:28pm
My thesis for an essay on "violence in King Lear"...please help ):
Good evening :) The quote means that in great texts, the authors didn't put violence in... »»
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kawaiigurl
Oct 12, 08, 02:33am
EF_Team5
Nov 13, 08, 08:18pm
My LoR - recommendation for Chinh Q. Nguyen
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sep7enary
Nov 13, 08, 05:31am
EF_Team5
Nov 13, 08, 05:10pm
Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?
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layaili
Nov 12, 08, 05:36pm
EF_Team5
Nov 13, 08, 04:21pm
Invisible Children (sociology essay)
Good evening. Mechanically, only one correction; make sure you consistently refer to the group as "the... »»
1
bgibson8708
Nov 12, 08, 03:25pm
EF_Team5
Nov 12, 08, 06:16pm
Being involved in or witnessed a trouble situation - Essay Help
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1
MementoMori
Nov 12, 08, 01:42pm
EF_Team5
Nov 12, 08, 06:08pm
Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure.
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masih_essay
Nov 11, 08, 05:14am
EF_Team5
Nov 12, 08, 04:54pm
Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article
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mrjojo
Nov 10, 08, 12:49pm
EF_Team5
Nov 12, 08, 04:54pm
Hypothesis essay on the book, Out of This Furnace
Good evening :) I have some general comments about the piece. First, mechanics. Make sure... »»
1
ldixon
Nov 11, 08, 05:51pm
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 06:12pm
Essay Comparing 2 poems with the theme of "Women"
Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely... »»
1
stacy32
Nov 11, 08, 03:05pm
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 05:42pm
The Process of Unification - Satirical essay on Religion
Good afternoon :) I think you use satire successfully in this piece, especially since you relate... »»
1
Gcardwell
Nov 11, 08, 01:20am
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 05:10pm
essay on compassion
Good afternoon :) Here are my thoughts: "If someone is sixty years old and... »»
1
sdalex
Nov 10, 08, 11:29pm
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 04:48pm
Changing My Lifestyle - pls check my expressions and grammar in this essay
Good afternoon :) Here are my thoughts: "How Do you mean "have?" you... »»
1
dawnnguyen
Nov 10, 08, 10:50pm
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 04:36pm
Parents are the best teachers. Agree or not?
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layaili
Nov 9, 08, 05:33pm
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 07:35am
Essay on "Prevention is better than Cure."
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5
masih_essay
Nov 10, 08, 06:34am
EF_Team5
Nov 11, 08, 07:35am
Research paper review :online gambling should be illegal
Since this is a persuasive essay, your title is very appropriate; I would leave it as it... »»
3
carebear
Nov 9, 08, 04:13pm
EF_Team5
Nov 10, 08, 07:26pm
Public smoking bans---Persuasive essay
Good evening :) Since you did not describe what kind of assistance you were seeking, I... »»
1
Britton87
Nov 10, 08, 03:07pm
EF_Team5
Nov 10, 08, 07:25pm
Personal Response (Ten Things the Chinese Do Much Better Than We Do)
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3
FissionMailed
Nov 8, 08, 08:50pm
EF_Team5
Nov 9, 08, 05:03pm
Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. do u agree or not?
Good morning :) OK, let's see. How about reworking it to something like: "The optimal lifestyle... »»
3
masih_essay
Nov 8, 08, 06:30am
EF_Team5
Nov 9, 08, 08:58am
IELTS essay -Young people taking study break for work or travel
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3
layaili
Nov 8, 08, 07:38am
EF_Team5
Nov 8, 08, 06:43pm
My Mom is the Most Influential Person - college application to UCONN
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3
kelseyyes
Nov 5, 08, 05:01am
EF_Team5
Nov 7, 08, 03:02pm
Character Analysis of "Lust": how the author creates a helpless character.
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3
Ruby3561
Nov 6, 08, 09:30am
EF_Team5
Nov 6, 08, 03:13pm
Distance learning and online computer classes - please rate my essay.
Good afternoon. Since you didn't specify what type of assistance you are seeking, I have edited... »»
1
sonali
Nov 6, 08, 03:19am
EF_Team5
Nov 6, 08, 02:29pm
Decline of Complexity in Music, Criticism and Help on Personal Belief Essay
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3
Quautemoc
Oct 30, 08, 11:24am
EF_Team5
Nov 5, 08, 03:26pm
The seasons of sunshine summer and winter paradise - comparison essay
Good afternoon. As I'm not sure what the specifics of this assignment are, I have commented... »»
1
galxrulz
Nov 5, 08, 10:01am
EF_Team5
Nov 5, 08, 03:03pm
short essay about presidential election, pls help me this essay
Good afternoon. Here are my thoughts: "First of all I'm Avoid using contractions in formal... »»
1
BBgirl
Nov 4, 08, 05:11pm
EF_Team5
Nov 4, 08, 05:21pm
Concert report - essay for my music class
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chimochi
Nov 3, 08, 11:54am
EF_Team5
Nov 4, 08, 05:00pm
Love experience - Narrative essay
Good afternoon. Since the prompt was not included in this posting, I have given suggestions for... »»
2
Sherali
Nov 3, 08, 09:04pm
EF_Team5
Nov 4, 08, 04:37pm
a comparison and contrast from two tales from the canterbury tales help!!!!
Good evening. Make sure you are capitalizing only proper nouns and the first words of sentences.... »»
3
lowryder49
Nov 2, 08, 09:26pm
EF_Team5
Nov 3, 08, 07:54pm
"Designing a hero" - essay about Linda Segers, "Creating the Myth"
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7
sweetcherokee74
Oct 4, 08, 12:04pm
EF_Team5
Nov 3, 08, 07:52pm
Intro and Thesis statement feedback on Globalization
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linooz
Nov 3, 08, 11:45am
EF_Team5
Nov 3, 08, 07:51pm
Need help critiquing what I've written so far on an essay about education
Good afternoon. Thank you for clarifying about the quotation; you are right to write it exactly... »»
4
Wonderfulloser
Nov 2, 08, 05:01pm
EF_Team5
Nov 3, 08, 04:52pm
Oates and Stone- A comparative research essay- I need a grammar review!
Thank you for your help however: - Americans cannot invade other americans (as far as wars go).... »»
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alexcuk
Nov 2, 08, 04:21pm
alexcuk
Nov 2, 08, 06:38pm
Is this a good satircal essay?? Please help!!
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xxcookiesxx
Nov 1, 08, 05:47pm
EF_Team5
Nov 2, 08, 05:24pm
Everything begins at any circumstance in life - FSU essay
Good afternoon. Here are my suggestions: "Almost everything one is, as an individual, begins at... »»
1
nemiperuvian
Oct 30, 08, 10:51pm
EF_Team5
Oct 31, 08, 03:26pm
Essay: marry someone familiar or different?
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sonali
Oct 29, 08, 03:33am
EF_Team5
Oct 31, 08, 02:55pm
The theme of the contest is WOW - help with my short story please!
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3
4ever2bleed
Oct 26, 08, 09:21pm
EF_Team5
Oct 31, 08, 02:55pm
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