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Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service

4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...

Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
Do you think people in your community are generally happy or unhappy?

NEW - I think happiness levels can be based on numerous factors, economic stability, good relationships, and good health are three...

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations.

NEW - In modern education systems, there is an ongoing debate about the role of schools in teaching practical skills such...

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Young people commit crimes should be treated same as adults by authorities. Agree or disagree

NEW - Some say that people should commit crimes at a young age; the same is true of how the government...

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Many people living in cities these days do not get enough physical exercise.

4 - Some nouns need to be added to the article "the" in front, such as "life" and "reason" in the...

Writing Feedbackkevintuankiet - Apr 21, 2024 / Abby210 - 16 hrs ago
Newspapers are having enormous influence on people ideas and opinions. Why is this the case?

NEW - Topic : Newspapers are having enormous influence on people ideas and opinions. Why is this the case? Is it...

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Being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers

NEW - In today's life, development of the Internet has brought a variety of benefits for people and that is a...

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Being dependend in the modern world

3 - @Anh_65 Introduce the topic in a neutral tone, that is don't state your opinion first, then allow the...

Writing FeedbackAnh_65 - Apr 21, 2024 / Layson Manga - Apr 22, 2024
Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative?

NEW - Given the development of product variety in every field and the popularity of the internet, advertisements are witnessing a...

Writing FeedbackHuyenle232 - Apr 22, 2024 / — -
What skills should the teenagers have to face stress and pressure?

NEW - In today's competitive environment, all teenagers have faced pressure or stress, which increases the risk of serious consequences affecting...

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Essay on the importance of use of force.

2 - Make sure to reference the author before the quotation int he paragraph. That way when you reference the...

Writing FeedbackJorge74 - Apr 19, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Imprisonment is the best solution to crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - Do not include terrorism in the reference. That was not part of the original presentation. Do not add...

Writing Feedbackchanpu - Apr 17, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
IELTS writing: Reasons and solutions for teenagers prefering socializing online to meeting in person

2 - The essay is overwritten. You should not write more than 300 words for the task 2 essay. That is...

Writing FeedbackNnop - Apr 17, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types from 2000 and 2009

2 - It is not enough to simply repeat the first part of the directions in the summary overview. You have...

Writing FeedbackQuien - Apr 17, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Some people think that in modern society individuals are becoming more dependent on each other.

2 - Nobody is asking if the statement is true or not. So you do not have to indicate that...

Writing Feedbackjasanh - Apr 17, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
People are living longer lives now than they did in the past.

2 - Nobody is arguing this information with you. There is no need to provide an attestation in the paragraph....

Writing FeedbackLy Ly - Apr 15, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1 - national consumer spending

2 - The essay is incomplete. The summary overview does not state several considerations such as : 1. What is...

Writing Feedbackhttra - Apr 15, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
News plays an important part in most people's lives

2 - The essay is due to receive an immediate failing score. Kindly look at the guide writing question again. It...

Writing Feedbackhanahahaha - Apr 15, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Abstract: Relationship between customers and supermarkets

2 - I think that you should avoid the mention of the Post Covid 19-era in the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedbackecho5016 - Apr 14, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it

2 - The first paragraph is not well developed. The idea behind the original topic got lost in the paraphrasing. The...

Writing FeedbackBAONGOC030815 - Apr 14, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Many women now have children later in life. What are the causes? What are the pros and cons?

2 - Avoid the use of over used and exaggerated English reference phrases such as this one. Examiners consider its...

Writing Feedbackhvnnnn - Apr 14, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Online classes make conventional classrooms unnecessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2 - The essay is going to receive an immediate failing score. A quick review of the given statement shows that...

Writing Feedbackmikeelenka23 - Apr 14, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Preventing foreign companies from opening businesses to protect the local companies

2 - All IELTS Task 2 essays are single opinion essays unless otherwise specified as a comparative discussion. Since this...

Writing Feedbackitsismeafighter - Apr 14, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The Impact of Social Media on Mental Health

2 - The introduction paragraph needs more clarity. You cannot go from social media to virtual reality (VR) without first establishing...

Writing Feedbackjasminali123 - Apr 13, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
(WRITING TASK 2) Cosmetic surgery

2 - There is no need to say this. You already established the discussion parameters within the prompt restatement and...

Writing Feedbackthuyanh1910 - Apr 12, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy.

2 - One of the immediate noticeable problems that will reduce your score is the way you have disregarded the English...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthuyha2001 - Apr 11, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
a huge money and time should be spent on wild animals or human population

2 - The prompt restatement is not clear. I am not sure if it is because the word choices are incorrect...

Writing Feedbackkhanhhuyen48936 - Apr 10, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Do you think it is better to do schoolwork with other students or to work alone?

2 - I do not know where to start with the review of this essay. It is simply not well written,...

Writing Feedbackhoangokkk205 - Apr 10, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Living away from home during university? - Ielts writing task 2

2 - Unfortunately, the way this essay is written is quite incoherent. It will definitely get the lowest marks possible in...

Writing FeedbackDeverX - Apr 9, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
The following graph shows the percentage of unemployment rates for the female in the UK.

2 - The summary overview and analytical paragraphs do not feel complete. It comes across as having missing information. There is...

Writing FeedbackHoaitam123 - Apr 9, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
Writing task 1: online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010

2 - It is always best to indicate the number of images provided in the summary overview. That way the reader...

Writing Feedbacka pearl - Apr 7, 2024 / Holt - Apr 19, 2024
IELTS WT2: spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

2 - There is a problem in the opening paragraph. There is no real restatement. as required by the task accuracy...

Writing Feedbacktanquocnguyen - Apr 7, 2024 / Holt - Apr 19, 2024
In order to learn a language well, we should also learn about cultures. Do you agree or disagree?

4 - Hi there, Your essay is well-written in my opinion, the idea is fully developed and some advanced words are...

Writing Feedbackhuong186 - Mar 31, 2024 / chloepham - Apr 16, 2024
Pros and cons of developing tourism industry

4 - i think you can give further explanation on the main idea of body1, like why "The tourist industry is...

Writing FeedbackIxora Ho - Apr 6, 2024 / chloepham - Apr 16, 2024
Is technology (television, computers, cell phones, tablet devices, MP3 players) beneficial for child

3 - Do not ramble and try to inflate the word count. It will only confuse the reader. Try to cut...

Writing FeedbackUrie - Apr 6, 2024 / akmaster101 - Apr 14, 2024
IELTS Writing Task 1- Households owning electronic devices

3 - In you last paragraph, perhaps you can separate the percentage of growth from stating the rising development. After many...

Writing FeedbackJennieaufif - Apr 4, 2024 / echo5016 - Apr 14, 2024
Some people believe that traveling alone is the best way to experience a country or a culture.

4 - On the one hand, it is seemingly understandable why people subscribe to the view that traveling alone is the...

Writing Feedbackalicean242 - Apr 3, 2024 / echo5016 - Apr 14, 2024
In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing

3 - Yes, like Holt said, use a space after any punctuation used, such as a period or comma. Additionally, I...

Writing FeedbackNguyenVanHung24 - Apr 3, 2024 / akmaster101 - Apr 13, 2024
How many migrants worked temporarily in 4 different countries

2 - The task 1 essay should only be composed of 200 words at the most. You have over analyzed the...

Writing FeedbackANCUTO - Apr 6, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - EDUCATION TOPIC

2 - The prompt restatement has 2 immediately seen mistakes. The first, is that the opening sentence is unrelated to the...

Writing FeedbackJennieaufif - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
The only reason for learning a foreign language is to travel to or work in a foreign country

2 - There are 3 points of view that should be present in the first paragraph. The first public opinion and...

Writing FeedbackChuyen97 - Apr 2, 2024 / Holt - Apr 12, 2024
The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and

2 - Sadly, the essay does not meet the minimum word requirement of 150 words. This will get an automatic failing...

Writing Feedbackwtfight - Apr 2, 2024 / Holt - Apr 12, 2024
Task 2: an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home

2 - Okay. This is a single opinion essay, not a comparison essay. Therefore, the response paragraph that does not relate...

Writing Feedbackjade126 - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Apr 12, 2024
Owned and rented accommodation - IELTS 1: Bar chart

4 - Data Accuracy: Double-check the percentages mentioned in your summary to ensure accuracy. Ensure that the percentages add up correctly...

Writing Feedbackffriendd - Mar 29, 2024 / DeverX - Apr 9, 2024
writing ielts task 1: The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were

5 - Clarity and Precision: Be precise with your descriptions. Instead of saying "the bar chart witnessed several changes," specify what...

Writing Feedbackpthu553 - Mar 29, 2024 / DeverX - Apr 9, 2024
Young people should be required to do unpaid work helping people in the community

3 - Hi there, I'm a bit confused by your conjunction " granted", I assume that the previous sentence and the...

Writing FeedbackKhacHauPham - Mar 29, 2024 / Jennieaufif - Apr 4, 2024
Miles Morales and his Legacy as a New Spider-Man

2 - You could also consider including a discussion that relates to the comparison of the previous iterations of Spider-Man against...

Writing Feedbackanthonys455 - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
The gaming industry - PS5 ENG102

2 - I believe that focusing your paper on specific problems early on in the research would also help. I do...

Writing FeedbackTolaDuressa - Mar 30, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Comparing living with parent and living in campus

2 - There is no effort on your part to paraphrase the original prompt. You merely did a cut and paste...

Writing FeedbackDuDu123 - Mar 30, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Writting task 2. The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the cost

2 - The essay discussion is based on the extent of your (dis)agreement with the provided discussion. It is not based...

Writing FeedbackTrang1711200 - Mar 28, 2024 / Holt - Apr 2, 2024
Mindset for ielts 1: the maps below shows Colwick Arts Centre in 2005 and today

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, I will try my best for the next time...

Writing FeedbackSarahisme - Mar 20, 2024 / Sarahisme - Apr 1, 2024
Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal

2 - You did a good job in the prompt restatement. It is on point and sticks close to the original....

Writing Feedbackphuonghanguyenth - Mar 28, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Essay about interview in most large companies

3 - @klinh2806 List your views specifically on your selection. Give detailed explanation on why you agree or disagree. Your essay...

Writing Feedbackklinh2806 - Mar 6, 2024 / Catherine Frank - Mar 28, 2024
ielts writing task 2: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries

2 - The essay will receive an immediate failing Task Accuracy score because you did not reword/restate/rewrite the topic in your...

Writing Feedbackpthu553 - Mar 28, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Social media has completely changed the way family and friends communicate with each other.

2 - You have not taken the writing time allowance into consideration with this essay presentation. It will be impossible for...

Writing FeedbackTHUY BACH - Mar 18, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.

3 - it is a great time....

Writing Feedbackanne150707 - Mar 25, 2024 / garrickchaos - Mar 28, 2024
Engineering, rough draft about engineering

2 - There are instances in the presentation where you could use more concise language. Some of your paragraphs tend to...

Writing FeedbackAprieto - Mar 27, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Some educationalists argue that non-exam, art-based subjects, such as music, drama, art, and craft..

2 - English essays follow one specific golden rule: All sentences must begin the first word with a capital letter /...

Writing Feedbacktohonganh - Mar 26, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people

2 - The first paragraph cannot meet the maximum preliminary scoring considerations because the writer has not made an effort to...

Writing FeedbackProlevelmax9 - Mar 25, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Annual Pay of Doctors and Other Workers

2 - An accurate summary overview would include a listing of the 7 countries in the line graph. It would also...

Writing Feedbacksophiemoore62 - Mar 23, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024

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