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During the Baroque period, people were attracted to by extremes of feeling and learned themselves and the world. - This sentence does not really make sense, although I think I know what you were trying to say. How about "During the Baroque period, people were excited by learning about themselves and the world around them."
One of the reasons science and philosophy affected the Baroque age is
that skepticism was growing in religious beliefs,
resulting in the Reformation and Counter-Reformation. As a result, scientists were more able to do things without any religious thought.
But most of the scientists were convicted of heresy. - Is this accurate; was it "most" of the scientists?
Another reason is
that people started to believe
the power of scientific truth. The baroque age was
one of many great inventions. For example, Galileo designed and built his own telescope, Fahrenheit invented
a system of measuring temperature, and Leibnitz invented
a new notation of calculus.
If you need to expand this a bit, you could talk more about what distinguished the Baroque Age. For example, the architecture and music were both very ornate and flowery. You could also talk more about Galileo; what it was he discovered and how he was forced to recant his views by the Church.
I hope this helps!
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
Sarah, EssayForum.com