Stone Angel (analytical essay: what Hagar wanted and got out of life?)

Hey, I am starting a new essay. It is about Stone Angel.I have to write an analytical essay to explain what Hagar wanted and what she got out of life. Consider material and spiritual things. Then evaluate her life. Is what she wanted of any value? Did she accomplish anything worthwhile in her life? Could you help me with an introduction containing a proper thesis for this essay?

How can we help you with an introduction if we don't know what you are going to say? Probably, you are having trouble with the introduction because you don't yet know what you are going to say. It is impossible to write an effective introduction if you've not yet decided what you are going to say. It's impossible to write a thesis statement if you haven't yet figured out your thesis.

So, What do you think: Consider material and spiritual things. Then evaluate her life. Is what she wanted of any value? Did she accomplish anything worthwhile in her life?

Brainstorm or free-write your answers to those questions. Keep brainstorming or free-writing until you have enough ideas to begin to narrow them into a thesis statement. We can help you phrase your thesis statement, and give you ideas for how to introduce and organize the essay, once we (and therefore you) know what you're going to say in the body of the essay.

Start by writing down everything you think she wanted. Then, look at the effects her efforts to get those things had on her life. Were they predominantly negative or positive? If the effects were mostly negative, were the effects the natural and inevitable results of pursuing her goals, or did she just go about her pursuit of those goals the wrong way? Answering these questions will help you decide whether her goals had value, and whether her pursuit of them was worth it. Once you have come up with this information, formulating a thesis shouldn't be too difficult.