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What is Great Gatsby really about ?

ArviThreads: 2
Posts: 13 		 Oct 9, 08, 05:28pm   #1
I need help to correct and some error.....and make it look like an appropriate paragrapgh....
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Arvi k
 
ArviThreads: 2
Posts: 13 		 Oct 9, 08, 05:38pm   #2
Great Gatsby is written by F. Scott Fitzgerald is about money, precious moments of character's life which could be past as well as trouble in character's life. The major theme in the novel is betrayal and American dream. Nick is narrative of the novel. However, Nick and protagonist Jay Gatsby are very good friends. Nick cares about Jay Gatsby. He finds Jay the most worthy person and likes him. Most likely, the story appeals Jay Gatsby and his love for the beautiful women Daisy who used to be his girlfriend when he was in army.

Arvi k
 
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Posts: 2700 [Moderator] 		 Oct 9, 08, 08:55pm   #3
Good evening.

Here are my suggestions:

"Great Gatsby is written by F. Scott Fitzgerald is about money, precious moments of character's life which could be past as well as trouble in character's life. This is a run-on sentence. The major theme (This should be plural because you name two subjects here.) in the novel is betrayal and the American dream. Nick is the narrator of the novel. However, Nick and protagonist Jay Gatsby are very good friends. Nick cares about Jay Gatsby. He finds Jay the most worthy person and likes him. Why? Most likely, the story appeals This doesn't fit; what do you mean here? Jay Gatsby and his love for the beautiful women (Daisy is singular; one woman.) Daisy who used to be his girlfriend when he was in army."

I hope this helps.

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ArviThreads: 2
Posts: 13 		 Oct 9, 08, 09:00pm   #4
ahh i actuallly wrote my other introduction .....
Nick narrated the story of "Great Gatsby" which is written by F. Scott Fitzgerald. The Great Gatsby is really about love, affairs, trouble in character's life and chronically death of Jay Gatsby, which is tragedy. The major theme in the novel is American Dream and betrayal. However, Nick finds Jay Gatsby the most worthy person and likes him. Moreover, they both are good friends and Nick cares about Jay. Nick is helping Gatsby to get Daisy. Also in the end, Daisy rejects Gatsby. Jay didn't realize how extraordinary a "nice" girl (Daisy) could be. She vanished into her rich house leaving Gatsby nothing. Gatsby was breathless, who was somehow betrayed.

Arvi k
 
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Posts: 2700 [Moderator] 		 Oct 9, 08, 09:39pm   #5
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