I wonder... is it supposed to be about EITHER a food fight OR the making of a soldier, or is it supposed to be like this: Food Fight: The making of a Soldier.
Because that would be cool!
Can you describe a change that occurs in a girl's mind as she suddenly is caught in the crossfire of a food fight? Anger wells up in her, and then momentary nervousness, and, suddenly, courage. She springs into action and gathers an arsenal of pudding.
Her life is changed forever by her new-found warrior spirit.
Kevin, EssayForum.com