C00kycookie
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i wrote this and i would like some feedback. Please and thankyou!!!
Imagination
Never ending
dreaming, creating, inspiring
portal to indefinite knowledge
illusion
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EF_Team2
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Edited by: EF_Team2
Mar 26, 08, 01:49am ¦ #2
Greetings!
I think you've done a great job with your cinquain poem! I especially like your description on Line 4. The only question I would have is about Line 2. As you know, Line 2 is to contain two adjectives which describe the noun on Line 1; technically, "never-ending" is one word, a hyphenated adjective. Now, that may be just fine; I suppose it depends how picky one wants to be. Personally, I like your poem just the way it is! :-)
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
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