The endless steppe review

I have to write a summary of a story. My teacher always says that I don't use big words. Can you please edit and include some big words.




Esther and her family lives a wonderful and cozy life in Vilna, Poland. Until, one day an unexceptable horrible incident takes place. That terrifies the family. Juvenile Esther and her family is arrested amd taken to Siberia. They arrive in a camp. Esther and her family endures the cold bitter weather, the hard labouries work, and the tough food conditions in a gymsum mine. When it was declared that some people can move to a town called Rubousk, Esther and her family moves. They now live in a small hut. Esther starts school. And things were starting to get normal. The question is will Esther and her family always have to live in this small hut made out of dug and endure hard living conditions. Or will esther and her family be able to return in there home, Vilna, Poland.

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Sure, I'd be happy to help spice it up just a bit! :-)

Esther and her family live a wonderful and cozy life in Vilna, Poland, until one day a terrifying event shatters their lives. Young Esther and her family are arrested and deported to Siberia. They arrive in a work camp, where they are forced to live under horrible conditions. Esther and her family endure bitterly cold weather, near-starvation food rations and back-breaking work in a gypsum mine. When it is announced that some people can move to a town called Rubousk, Esther and her family seize the opportunity. There, they live in a small hut. Esther starts school and things begin to acquire some semblance of normalcy. The question is, will Esther and her family always have to live in this small hut made out of dung and endure hard living conditions, or will they be able to return to their home in Vilna, Poland.

I haven't read The Endless Steppe, so I don't know how it ends--is that all there is? It seems left rather up in the air. You might want to add a bit at the end for some closure.

Best of luck in your studies!

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Sarah, EssayForum.com