s2_krish
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There question was.
Instructions: Please describe why you are applying to EMSE and the reasons why this master course can make a difference in your career.
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My name is Krishna Bahadur Sunuwar. I have completed Bachelor of Science in Information Technology (BScIT) from Sikkim Manipal University, India in 2006. Currently, I am working with Red Couch Interactive, a Software/Interactive Media company (30-50 people employee) as the Chief Operating Officer.
After finishing my higher secondary (12 academic years of study), I decided to choose software development as a career and joined BScIT in Feb 2001. After some years, I took up a part-time job with a web designing company. Before joining University, I attended a short term training course in programming languages and different graphic tools.
In July 2006, I joined the Nepal office of Red Couch Interactive, Houston, TX, USA as Project Manager. It was the real start of my career in the software industry where I have had great opportunities to experience challenging projects and innovation-intensive task.
Software Engineering and Project Management are my key fields of interest. My success in my work environment has motivated me to learn more about software engineering which was initiated by my passion in computer technology. The world is now extensively influenced by new developments in technology. All sectors are widely using this new technology, and as such there is a huge demand to develop efficient and quality software within a specified time frame and budget. Thus, I wish to be better equipped to accept and solve challenges which I may encounter.
My choice of course is largely motivated by the fact that this course arms me with the necessary skills in standard practice in software development. Additionally, I am also attracted by the prospect of interacting and training under researchers from respected universities. It is a great opportunity for me to experience and train in a cross-culture, diverse environment. The high-quality double degree award and scholarship option are also point of attractions.
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EF_Team2
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Greetings!
Your essay is very good! I have just a couple of suggestions:
I have had great opportunities to experience challenging projects and innovation-intensive tasks.
The high-quality double degree award and scholarship option are also points of attraction.
I think you need perhaps one more concluding sentence to give it a more finished feeling. Something specific to that particular school or its program would be good.
Best of luck in your studies!
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
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