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seddleman
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   Edited by: seddleman     Oct 8, 08, 04:57pm ¦ #1

Does my essay answer the prompt? Do i need to add a stronger intro or a conclusion paragraph?

Prompt:
For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.

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       Oct 8, 08, 07:27pm ¦ #2

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