kincade
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Let's be honest; how do you feel about having to write? Being that I have a preconception attitude towards writing, I feel that writing is incredibly vital to our society. Now that we have all of this technology writing is being over looked, and I think that I sometimes take my writing skills for granted. If truth be told, there was a time where my ancestors were neither allowed nor able to read nor write. So I feel that I have to write because its part of my rights and no man can take that from me. However; on the other hand the reason why I abhorrence against writing is that, I don't like it when teachers or the writers of the thea gives bad topics to students to write about. I think if you're going take that job title on or give an assignment it needs to be something that they would want to write about, all I'm asking as a student is that for a minute they take the time out to get into a mine set of a student and think about when they were in school and had to write about some off the wall topic. It would be better if they would just not throw a topic on the board, to be creative with their assignments and their job duties.
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kincade
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i need help with my writting assignment and i was wondeing if you could help me come up with a conclusion please and thank you
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EF_Team5
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Sure. Let's see:
"Let's be honest; how do you feel about having to write? Being that I have a preconception attitude What exactly is this attitude? A preconception is like a stereotype: it is an opinion that you hold about a subject without knowing more about the specific subject. What kind of preconceived attitude towards writing do you have? towards writing, I feel that writing is incredibly vital to our society. Now that we have all of this technology writing is being over looked, and I think that I sometimes take my writing skills for granted. If truth be told, there was a time where my ancestors were neither allowed nor able to read or write. As a result of this I feel that I have to write because its part of my rights and no man can take that from me. However; on the other hand the reason why I have this abhorrence against writing is that (Remove comma) I don't like it when teachers or the writers of the thea What is this? give bad topics to students to write about. I think if you're going take that job title on or give an assignment it needs to be something that students would want to write about. All I'm asking as a student is that for a minute they take the time out to get into a mindset of a student and think about when they were in school and had to write about some off the wall topic. It would be better if they would just not throw a topic on the board, to be creative with their assignments and their job duties."
A few thoughts that you could include to make your essay more rounded. Do you think that instructors do not have an objective in making students write about certain topics? Is it not a little boring to keep writing about the same things over and over again, even if they are things you find enjoyable? Isn't education about broadening horizons and learning new things? A conclusion is meant to tie up the loose ends of your essay and reiterate the things you have already talked about. You could loop back around and close with a statement about how writing was once a privilege reserved for the select few and because of that you feel you should use it, but at the same time you would like to use it only to write about things that you enjoy and have prior knowledge on. Good luck!
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