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in 150 words, please describe an activity

eminemya
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       Feb 23, 08, 05:54am ¦ #1

Thanks a lot, again:)


Energetic and rebellious, two of my best friends and I boldly decided to cycle through Heilongjiang Province (famous for pine forest) from south to north on our own regardless of the parents' objection. With a careful preparation, the journey went on smoothly in the first three days. But on the fourth day, the unexpectedly rugged path in mountain forest frustrated us and we disastrously failed to arrive at the town where we were supposed to be. Submerged in the dim moonlight, cool air and whistle of animals, we exhaustedly pushed the bicycles forward. Feeling frightened and helpless, we sang encouraging songs together to keep the morale. When the passion died off and the illusions fell to pieces, what still remained was our promise to never give up. Fortunately, we finally bumped into an unmapped village at midnight. Twenty three days after setting out, we reached our destination, the north pole of China, and had a whole day celebration---to sleep on the fine linen in the hotel after hot bath.


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       Feb 23, 08, 10:27pm ¦ #2

Greetings!

Glad to help!

Energetic and rebellious, two of my best friends and I boldly decided to cycle through Heilongjiang Province (famous for its pine forest) from south to north on our own regardless of our parents' objection. With a careful preparation, the journey went on smoothly in the first three days. But on the fourth day, the unexpectedly rugged path in the mountain forest frustrated us and we disastrously failed to arrive at the town where we were supposed to be. Submerged in the dim moonlight, cool air and whistle of animals, we exhaustedly pushed the bicycles forward. Feeling frightened and helpless, we sang encouraging songs together to keep up our morale. When the passion died off and the illusions fell to pieces, what still remained was our promise to never give up. Fortunately, we finally bumped into an unmapped village at midnight. Twenty three days after setting out, we reached our destination, the north pole of China, and had a whole day of celebration---to sleep on the fine linen in the hotel after a hot bath.

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