Recomendation letter for my student

Greetings i am sending you my letter of recomendation which I am writing for my student.please review it and rate this recomendation letter out of 10.Please guide me where there are mistakes.You can also suggest some suggestions.

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I have taught Hamza Mathematics for four years in the Cambridge Ordinary and Advanced Levels. Being his teacher I can vouch that he is one of the most brilliant and conscientious student that I have encountered in my entire teaching career. He has a very comprehensive understanding of the subjects and has excellent analytical skills.

He has proved himself as an independent learner as he studies not only the text covering the syllabus but other books and generals related to the topics. During the lessons he would jot interesting and intelligent questions that he would ask at the end. This act of his has resulted in arousing thinking skills to develop in his classmates and better understanding of the lesson.

In my fifteen years of teaching experience I have known other students with talent equivalent to Hamza. Many of them lacked his good nature and humility. Hamza has an extremely amiable personality and is popular among his colleagues and faculty as he shows great consideration and deep respect for others. Hamza has a sound work ethic and is able to handle the pressure of deadlines well. Last November, I gave his class two extremely tedious assignments to be submitted within a couple of days on Cartesian equations, Hamza was the only one in the class who managed to submit his work on time. This shows his seriousness to work hard.On numerous occasions he helped some students in various areas in Mathematics. Soft spoken and polite, he demonstrates the best of behavior and excellent study habits.

He has striking characteristics and outstanding intellectual ability. Having innate leadership qualities, Hamza has led his college in numerous academic as well as co-curricular events.
As his teacher I strongly believe that his commitment, intellectual ability and enthusiasm for learning are qualities that should serve him well in his future endeavors. He is undoubtedly the type of student that has the potential for great success at the college level. His natural abilities, combined with his work ethic and ability to evolve academically, are recipes for success in the years to come I enthusiastically recommend him for admission to your institution.

Greetings!

What an excellent recommendation! I have just a few editing suggestions for you:

Being his teacher, [add comma] I can vouch that he is one of the most brilliant and conscientious students that I have encountered in my entire teaching career.

This act of his has resulted in arousing thinking skills to develop in his classmates and better understanding of the lesson. - This sentence could be a little smoother; perhaps something like "This allowed him to present thoughtful ideas and encourage better understanding among his classmates, as well."

Last November, I gave his class two extremely tedious assignments to be submitted within a couple of days on Cartesian equations; [use semicolon] Hamza was the only one in the class who managed to submit his work on time. This shows his serious dedication to working hard.

His natural abilities, combined with his work ethic and ability to evolve academically, are recipes for success in the years to come.[add period] I enthusiastically recommend him for admission to your institution.

Hamza sounds like a wonderful young man, and he is lucky that you are his teacher!

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Sarah, EssayForum.com