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| "Proud to be a cartoon addict" (Common App Statement) Need help shortening!
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| Common App Essay [What topic should this be if I want to choose my own topic?]
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| MIT How has your Personality impacted your Life?
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| 'Yoga, Take in a deep breath' - Common Application Extracurricular activity
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| Eat,Pray, Love- UVa supp
Undergraduatearianna_muv - Dec 28, 2011DeepaJ19 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| "learning through video games" - Why Computer Science (carnegie mellon)
Undergraduatemiketheaddict - Dec 28, 2011cherrybomb94 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| UChicago Required Essay: What does Play-doh have to do with Plato?
UndergraduateSuppiSteph - Dec 28, 2011cherrybomb94 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'visited Japan earlier the summer' - Diversity 2nd choice for common app essay
Undergraduatepostscript94 - Dec 28, 2011carochoi - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Cornell Supplement Essay College of Arts and Sciences
Undergraduatejesusc11 - Dec 28, 2011jesusc11 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Urbana Champaign Essay #1 Academic Interest - Civil and environmental engineering
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| 'Making my mark academically' - Stanford-- What matters to you? and why?
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| NYU (online store + stern)
3 - I think you can elaborate more in your last paragraph. If possible, try to cut a few things out... Undergraduatehellokittyhello - Dec 27, 2011carochoi - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'Student's freedom to own curriculum' - Duke Supplement: Why Trinity College?
Undergraduateyuanyuan3045 - Dec 28, 2011yuanyuan3045 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Experience -- Commonapp short answer
UndergraduateSagar_Patel12 - Dec 28, 2011kimisizer - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Why Northwestern? This is my dream school; perfect balance between academics, music and athletics
UndergraduateWildcatSR - Dec 28, 2011ruthyj - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'The bright moon' - help edit my williams supplement
Undergraduatem45over - Dec 28, 2011Klabberghasted - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Boston University Essay - Roommate Essay
Undergraduateseaweedsong - Dec 28, 2011ZhoeK - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Brown: Long Answer
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| Change is inevitable; 'What motivates people to change' - SAT ESSAY
Writing Feedbackilovecandy - Dec 27, 2011deremifri - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'Contributing more to the society' - common app essay on an extracurricular
UndergraduateJaineel406 - Dec 28, 2011TheLeader - Dec 28, 2011 |
| JHU Supplement - Physics and Astronomy
Undergraduatekimisizer - Dec 28, 2011kimisizer - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'being a American' - Common APP Achievement Essay
Undergraduatesingh955 - Dec 28, 2011seaweedsong - Dec 28, 2011 |
| MIT: How has your world shaped your dreams?
Undergraduatecupnoodle123 - Dec 28, 2011deremifri - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Columbia Supplement Essays (Why Columbia and Why Biology)
UndergraduateEigenvector - Dec 28, 2011music920 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'images have lingered to this day' - Cornell College of HumanEc
UndergraduateCollegeHopefuls - Dec 28, 2011yusra12 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'An extension of life' - JHU supplement essay
UndergraduateJaineel406 - Dec 28, 2011Jaineel406 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| JHU Supplement Essay - MAJORS question
Undergraduatenikariotz - Dec 28, 2011Jaineel406 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'childlike innocence' - Williams looking through a window supplement
Undergraduatemusic920 - Dec 28, 2011Eigenvector - Dec 28, 2011 |
| Common App Essay: Baking
Undergraduatelolcopters - Dec 28, 2011sm09 - Dec 28, 2011 |
| 'Not a random mixture of ethnicities alone' - Common App essay diversity
Undergraduateujax - Dec 26, 2011ujax - Dec 28, 2011 |