vikingwrestler
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i really dont know what to think of as a thesis statment ,what to prove? i have all the information but its just i need a kick start,im not really good at writing or starting a paper but thanks
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EF_Team2
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Greetings!
A thesis statement can sound like a rather intimidating chore, but think of it this way: what is your paper really about? What point does it want to prove? For example, here are a couple of different approaches for a paper on the atomic bomb:
"In 1945, a new force was unleashed which may have doomed the human race to orchestrating its own extinction."
"In 1945, a new force was unleashed which ended a world war and gave birth to the potential creation of a balance of power that will keep rogue nations in check."
It really depends which direction you want your essay to lean. Do a little research on the creation of the atomic bomb and see what angle appeals to you. Once you have a rough draft of your first paragraph, I'd be happy to start helping you shape and edit it.
Thanks,
Sarah, EssayForum.com
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