bobo
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Downtown Panama City is involved all the areas from Tomba Muerto to Avenida Balboa. These areas (main streets) have always been a traffic problem. The congestion has neither specific hours nor roads.
Can you help me with two chapters related to this topic "A traffic-free zone in downtown Panama city", and give solutions.
*Panama is a small country which has no space for subway, sky train.
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EF_Team2
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Greetings!
I'll be happy to help, although I'm afraid I don't know anything about the topic. I can help with writing advice, however.
Let's start with the first paragraph:
Downtown Panama City is involved all the areas from Tomba Muerto to Avenida Balboa. These areas (main streets) have always been a traffic problem. - Downtown Panama City contains streets from Tomba Muerto to Avenida Balboa. These main streets have always been a traffic problem.
no space for subway, sky train. - no space for subways or sky trains.
That's all I see that needs changing in the excerpts you sent. As for advice on solutions--your research on the topic should help you find solutions that have been suggested by other people. Once you have discovered what other people think, you can agree or disagree with them and offer your own suggestions for improvement.
I wish you the best of luck with your paper!
Sarah
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