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Personal Statement for Fulbright scholarship

6 - Thanks Kevin, justivy83, and Icturn87. Here is my updated version after your awesome comments. I have changed the spellings to US...

Scholarshipssbnessbne - Yesterday
The Importance of Random Acts of Kindness

NEW - Consider something in your life you think goes unnoticed and write about why it's important to you. On a hot,...
Advantage of mass communication

4 - The third paragraph has an error. The word Chanel should be Change. Change that sentence so the sentence will be easier...

Writing Feedbackravindrasolankilcturn87 - Yesterday
SAT: Should people make more of an effort to keep some things private?

2 - Hi, I cannot grade your essay, but I will give you feedback on some sentences. __________________________ I would...

Writing FeedbackdescripChristineB - Yesterday
Narrative Letter for Diversity Scholarship Appeal (Mizzou; prompt included)

2 - This is the one I wrote for my brother: 7/27/15 Tomas YOUR ADDRESS Tucson, AZ 85719 PIMA...

Scholarshipphdjr96mayhar - Yesterday
Cultural adaptation is an important factor that promotes unity and social integration in a community

2 - Hi, Irving844 !!! Here I make some suggestions: 1. Please write the question completely so that readers enable providing...

Writing FeedbackIrving844Dawn01 - Yesterday
Schools can help change obesity rates in schools through education.

2 - I can help you with some of your essay. When you have more than one idea or create a list,...

Writing Feedbackmayharlcturn87 - Yesterday
My reflection on My Brilliant Life; the supplement essay for Boston College

3 - I can help you with you writing. When I looked at the first word, I noticed a misspelling. The first word...

Undergraduatethaisontrinhlcturn87 - Yesterday
Question on leadership in water management now or in the future?

2 - Due to the long lasting problem in the water sector of the island that I reside on called Rodrigues. ( rra.govmu.org/)...

ScholarshipUgo007mayhar - Yesterday
Acceptance essay to the Illinois Art Institute of Chicago

3 - thank you justivy03! that was very helpful. how should i detail my strengths though? im not even sure what they are....

Undergraduatedreamerowldreamerowl - Yesterday
"The people in power have created an obesity epidemic" - but not only rich countries are exposed now

2 - - A wise man namelynamed Roman Atkins - What foods we consume and how we consume them. - Foods...

Writing Feedbackfi49_3justivy03 - Yesterday
Appeal Letter to reconsider decision on granting with the Dean Scholarship

2 - - .. this upcoming fall semester.. - I appreciate youtaking the time to read this letter. - By reading this...

Lettersdchecojustivy03 - Yesterday
Many people think that emigrating from homeland could bring various benefits

3 - - for study or settlementto settle. - ...various benefits to thepublic and individuals as whole. - From Socialthe social...

Writing Feedbackalan87rajustivy03 - Yesterday
The cultural adaptation is crucial however people should also not forget their own customs.

3 - - ..found offensive fromto other citizens of the others. - ...some Vietnamese cultural heritages and relics. - .....people...

Writing Feedbacklacusclynejustivy03 - Yesterday
Gender sterotypes in the media

3 - Well, Clickher, gender stereotype is a topic that is considered a taboo for a lot of people, specially those ones...

Essaysclickherosnoobjustivy03 - Yesterday
Awkward relationship with my uncle - ApplyTexas Essay Topic B

3 - - Because his position required him to work inside ofthe warehouse for most of the time,.. - ...since my emotion oftowards...

UndergraduateKilleenerjustivy03 - Yesterday
Prepare for the effects of global climate change

3 - Hi, greenw4y2 !!! I have some minor suggestions: - Second, government should appeal to everyone for encourage planting more trees...

Writing Feedbackgreenw4y2Dawn01 - Yesterday
People in India believe that prolonged yoga exercise can also cure many diseases.

3 - - Unhealthy life with ailments and stress are not smooth, - they just drag us to thenegativity of life. -...

Writing Feedbackbhagyashreejustivy03 - Yesterday
Role of educational institutions in shaping one's career. Evaluate this issue essay.

3 - - Their roles are next to that of theirparents for.. - ....and exaggerated about their likely hood of success than others....

Writing Feedbackarpita91justivy03 - Yesterday
The tobacco has a lot of poisons substances which have harmful effects on users and non-users.

2 - Hi, Azadeh85 !!! Here I make some suggestions: 1. It is better if you give a space among each...

Writing FeedbackAzadeh85Dawn01 - Yesterday
Common App Question: What problem you'd like solved and steps to get solution

5 - Thank you so much @justivy03! Do you think the introduction is a little bit too much or is it good? And...

Undergraduatehashwindersinghhashwindersingh - Jul 28, 2015
Is using humor the best way to approach difficult situations and problems? SAT October 2009

6 - gayan1991, Thanks for responding. Actually, I think that your opinion is biased and inconsistent. The 2nd essay get a full...

Writing FeedbackDawn01Dawn01 - Jul 28, 2015
New species of Hoplolaimus.

2 - hanhbich, I will help you with a few things. ______________________________ Be sure you italicize the genus/species names you mention. For...

Research PapershanhbichChristineB - Jul 28, 2015
Think about the person you admire. What qualities does that person have that are admirable?

3 - Hi, chibichan !! Here I make some suggestions: -Diligence is the first quality of him that make me admire...

UndergraduatechibichanDawn01 - Jul 28, 2015
Substantial increase in criminal activities is a serious concern of many countries around the world.

2 - Like your essay, but you should provide some specific examples(like news that is related to crime, government, and etc) and explanations...

Writing Feedbackrupen008Killeener - Jul 28, 2015
Letter for research opportunity position - collaborative governance

NEW - I want to apply for research opportunity, please help me for correcting this letter: Subject : Prospective research opportunity position...

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Experience: developing processes and solving issues in client-HP network - SOI; Master of Management

5 - HI Lakia Thank you for the critique. I edited my essays to reflect two of your three suggestions. It...

GraduateMarivannoMarivanno - Jul 28, 2015
Professional athletes have what it takes to be a role model; dedication, good hygiene, good behavior

4 - M 2 cents. More professional sportsmen are quite shown in public by community the media , as compared to...

Writing Feedbackgayan1991Marivanno - Jul 28, 2015
College expectations, before attending it

4 - My reccommendation is to not use the term "things" as often. I mean, you can't always find a substitution but maybe...

Undergraduateclarinesukamtohashwindersingh - Jul 28, 2015
'high quality academic programs' - What is the reason of studying in the boarding school? IELTS

5 - My 2 cents. The number of boarding school students now is on the increase. Although the fee is more expansive...

Writing FeedbackDieu AnhMarivanno - Jul 28, 2015
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