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NOT YET (College Entrance Essay)

NEW - Have you ever wondered why people write essays? From my experience, I have been writing essays since I was in first...

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IELTS:Parents sending their kids abroad to acquire good education. Good or bad trend?

3 - I noticed that you change very often time scale of the ideas, which describe a person who studies abroad or the...

Writing Feedbackdevabe2005VadimKlimenko - 12:53am
TOEFL: children should be allowed to play computer games(the whole title is written in the message)

2 - Hi, here is 2 cents from me ) Hope you will find my comments useful. Firstly, in reality our society,...

Writing FeedbackDearbhailSVadimKlimenko - 12:34am
TOEFL: It is more important to use available land for farmland, housing, and industry.

2 - Dumi, thanks a lot for the advice, I got the point. I will look through several examples of essays exploiting the...

Writing FeedbackVadimKlimenkoVadimKlimenko - 12:02am
Whether each individual or government should be responsible for the healthy diet?

2 - It's really helpful to me! Thanks a lot Vadimklimenko! :)

Writing Feedbackningoningo - Yesterday
IELTS: In many countries recently young single people have been living far from their parent

2 - I agree with Pahan. You need to stay aligned with your prompt and introduce the background of the issue in...

Writing Feedbacklatkhandumi - Yesterday
Business is an right investment for future despite of the economic crisis

2 - thanks for your comment. I will remember that

Writing Feedbackwonnguyenwonnguyen - Yesterday
More stressful jobs and reasons behind it - let's discuss the topic

1 - Well, I guess this is an IELTS or TOEFL task as your topic sounds :) If that is...

Research PapersMrNodirBekPahan - Yesterday
Creative title for my English essay on Thoreau's Civil Disobedience

1 - How about The Power of Resilience?

Essaysnat95vc859 - Yesterday
The reflection of the Kite Runner

1 - This is a pretty good essay. But you need to add more information and analysis to your third body paragraph. Also...

Book Reportsmemory9711vc859 - Yesterday
'Travel is the thing, that makes you richer' - Semester at Sea Essay

1 - I think the number of your family members is irrelevant. you have repeated your idea. and i barely...

Writing FeedbackoreilleeHiruni - Yesterday
Studying in foreign university should be very helpful for everybody who does not afraid difficulties

2 - Hello dumi, thanks for your comments and correction. I've rearranged the order of sentences and added a background sentence....

Writing FeedbackNortTNortT - Yesterday
The wide-spread use of labor-saving devices has only made our life much more hectic.

NEW - Warm Greetings Users and Experts, I'm appearing for an essay competition soon in the age category of 15-16 years old. Please...
Not only mother is giving her time and energy to nourish and raise children

2 - You should avoid using question to start an essay. The purpose is to paraphrase this topic fluently. Try...

Writing FeedbackHiruniningo - Yesterday
IELTS - historic buildings are precious legacy to human development

1 - "development of modernization"? I really don't get your idea :( You need to open your essay...

Writing FeedbackMinnaliaodumi - Yesterday
Technology Consulting Summary in CV

1 - I applied for a position within for a Technology Consulting role due to the increasing importance of such solutions...

Graduateritanccdumi - Yesterday
TOEFL Essay- People should master on skill only or many different skills.

5 - I think the last examples "one more friend, one more way to go" cannot support your view very well. It can...

Writing FeedbackJiazigaoDearbhailS - Jul 31, 2014
TOEFL - people are way more disparate at the exterior contrary to what they are inside

2 - I think if you can write two examples, this essay can be better. Because this essay does not conclud enough details...

Writing Feedbackshreyansh13DearbhailS - Jul 31, 2014
'I believe that a study in New Zealand will be a fruitful stage of my life' - application letter

1 - My name is Lillian, born on July 2nd [/i] 1993. In 2010, I joined North College of the Beijing University of...

LettersggtutorGulnar604 - Jul 31, 2014
"As soon as you trust yourself, you will learn how to live" - experiences that defined you

1 - Good Job! I'll just give some suggestions, for example, instead of saying " I give my gratitude to God", you can...

UndergraduateqwertyddamGulnar604 - Jul 31, 2014
IELTS - 'the chart also predicts the proportions in 2040' - quantity of the population aged 65

2 - Thank you :)

Writing FeedbackHiruniHiruni - Jul 31, 2014

5 - it seems an introduction, not a conclusion

Writing Feedbackeirehcfikri - Jul 31, 2014
IELTS: some people think the government should spend more money on science than art. Do you agree ?

2 - i don't understand thiss sentence

Writing Feedbacksky1997fikri - Jul 31, 2014
Ielts: Can environmental problems be solved by individuals?

4 - Sometimes, the best way to think of ideas for an essay is to start with an example. One good example can...

Writing Feedbackningofikri - Jul 31, 2014
IELTS Essay - Appropriate age of adulthood

2 - you wrote some relevant examples which have connection to your society, keep it

Writing Feedbackmsarkarfikri - Jul 31, 2014
IELTS Museums and art galleries should show artworks of the local culture

4 - it is better when you put a suggestion in your conclusion, but it will be better if you give...

Writing Feedbacksundin928fikri - Jul 31, 2014
Ielts: Is it necessary to teach children handwriting?

5 - here is my example,, Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do...

Writing Feedbackningofikri - Jul 31, 2014
TOEFL: 'ancient people lived a natural life' - Now it's easier to maintain health

5 - Thank you so much!! These replies are so helpful!

Writing FeedbackStevenKuangStevenKuang - Jul 31, 2014
Some cultures value more the elderly people, while others paid more attention on young generation

4 - It is a little bit difficult to provide more meaningful feedbacks without seeing your full prompt. However, I guess this is...

Writing FeedbackGulnar604Pahan - Jul 31, 2014
'children in Gaza' - Pre-Toefl - Childhood is not always a happiest time of people's life

5 - Yes, I quite agree with Ahmad :) What he has suggested is the most appropriate approach because it...

Writing FeedbackSarah GharaviPahan - Jul 31, 2014
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