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GAP year essay for common app required explanation. Mount Holyoke College Applicant

4 - Enjila, you have done remarkable work with this revision. Even with the existing grammatical errors, it is easy to tell that...

Undergraduateenashley13vangiespen - 08:26am
Write about experience - Description about my Internship

10 - Nurba, since you are allowed to use the listing format for your application, I suggest that you use it to the...

GraduateNurbavangiespen - 08:09am
We are not so powerless as it seems - Bentley

7 - Philipe, the essay is a bit confusing because you are jumping around between how you became involved with the KSpace volunteer...

UndergraduateCharphilvangiespen - 07:35am
Nigerian - I have always felt like an outcast - Wisconsin Unnoticed essay

3 - I believe that you can also use this essay for your central identity prompt but you will have to make some...

UndergraduateDapocalypse7vangiespen - 07:29am
Diversity is a beautiful thing. Imagine how boring the world would be if it were homogenous

2 - Andrew, the first thing that I asked myself when I started to read this essay was "What question is he trying...

UndergraduateAndrewT97vangiespen - 07:26am
A Secret Worth Sharing

2 - Amelia, your essay talks about the secret that you are a runner right? That being the case, I am wondering how...

Undergraduatezhuzhu08vangiespen - 07:19am
I am keen on focusing on culture and cultural management for my further study

3 - Chen, since you asked :-) ... I would advice you to develop more information about your participation in the Nanjing Youth...

GraduateCharlotte2014vangiespen - 06:36am
The 'King Kongs' - Caltech - Honor Code Essay

8 - Laan, this is very good. However, I believe that you should offer an explanation about your own school's honor and integrity...

Research Papersstarlinksvangiespen - 06:35am
Schools, parents, and students would benefit with the requirements of wearing uniforms

2 - Biviana, there are a number of grammatical problems that weaken your almost perfectly argued essay. I hope I can help you...

Writing Feedbackbivi1222vangiespen - 06:19am
Traveling to a new places, studying new things and learning more about different culture and psyche

1 - Man, there are a number of problems with your essay. Even before we can address the grammar problems, we are faced...

Graduateman gvangiespen - 05:54am
Born and bred in Nepal, I am familiar to myriad diseases people fall prey to all year round

8 - Born and bred in Nepal, which is a small and economically poor country, I grew up highly familiar with the illnesses...

Undergraduatesuvekcha19suvekcha19 - 04:13am
IELTS: Decreasing Levels of Fresh Water

7 - Good points. Thank you Meagan! I'll try to observe them in further writings.

Writing FeedbackRemansouRemansou - 04:02am
IELTS Essay: People have always been seeking for their basic needs - Shopping Habits

2 - I don't know how to express my gratitude for your help Louisa . The best feedback I ever received. I learnt...

Writing FeedbackRemansouRemansou - 03:59am
IELTS: More People Living by Themselves

10 - Congratulation Vettrivel! My exam would be in three weeks. My aim is a 7 so I should do my best....

Writing FeedbackRemansouRemansou - 02:03am
medical treatment ielts test question

6 - Some sectors believe that the budget for health should be emphasized increasing research and medical technolog should be allocated...

Writing Feedbackbteng011284Remansou - 01:55am
Integrating my love for biology and engineering - Which Department in MIT?

1 - I like the content of your first essay, it shows your passion in the field you mentioned. However, you need to...

Undergraduatestarlinksmelramadhani - 12:11am
Good parenting with better schooling, when combined - children will grow into a gem to our society

2 - I think you essay is really good

Writing Feedbackshavaktmbivi1222 - Yesterday
My bad experiences help me to fight harder and to go after what I want - CBEST essay

2 - To Vangiespen: thank you so much for correcting my essay I really appreciated!!!

Writing Feedbackbivi1222bivi1222 - Yesterday
'sitting on the steps of the Low Memorial Library' - Columbia University essay

5 - I just remembered an anecdote that would connect architecture and my desire for liberal arts! (with your help) Thanks so much....

Undergraduatesenpenguinsenpenguin - Yesterday
"Norouz" - it would be a beautiful celebration for all nations in the world; TOEFL essay

11 - Hamed, your essay writing skills have greatly improved over the time I have been assisting you. Thank you for your faith...

Writing Feedbackhamedmasvangiespen - Yesterday
"choose career you love, and you'll never have to work a day in your life" - FIT admission essay

4 - thank you so much!

Undergraduateryleeclarkheyitsrylee - Yesterday
For the past 10 years of my life, I have been deeply involved with my district's 4-H Program

1 - - I feel that this paragraph can be omitted in favor of the next one which is more important since...

Undergraduatearfieldsyvangiespen - Yesterday
I had never expected that Economics would become my dream major - UIUC essay

3 - A few sentences of whole paragraphs about it, either way will work. What is important is that you are able to...

Undergraduatekkkkkryptonvangiespen - Yesterday
The word "Ethiopian" over the years have been manipulated to mean so many things nowadays

5 - i really don't know which parts to shorten but i understand it being too long and cutting out unnecessary parts also...

UndergraduateMismak17Mismak17 - Yesterday
Do we need a teacher to learn English?

4 - Chloe, simply put, you are being asked to explain whether you believe that teachers are necessary for the teaching...

Writing FeedbackChloe121vangiespen - Yesterday
UChicago "untranslatable, personal word: Sobremesa"

4 - Shannon, you will need to use a transition sentence to explain that you are giving an English version of the Spanish...

Undergraduateshannonnmmvangiespen - Yesterday
The sky flamed like an overripe mango; vivid reds and oranges spilling into the horizon.

2 - Sarah, I agree with Shannon in this case. You just need to revise the introduction to the paragraph. I know that...

Undergraduatesingahvangiespen - Yesterday
If I'd follow the path of what society thinks about ways to become successful, I would fail.

3 - That was the prompt i followed but i didnt follow it all the way if you know what i mean i...

Undergraduateqweralokdqweralokd - Yesterday
Expression Through Hair - Common App Essay

1 - Props for a well written essay Kennysha :-) You really wrote a very informative and creative central identity story. Most people...

Undergraduatexeber_97vangiespen - Yesterday
Essay on swimming - it's part of my life - Babson

7 - Louisa, thanks for helping me with this! Below is my final version. I've always thought that being short and...

UndergraduateCharphilCharphil - Yesterday
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