|Technology is very much a part of modern life. Check usage, structure and convention (Cbest writing)
8 - wow.. you are totally in different level of writing skill.. Thank you. I will work on that part.....
Writing FeedbackExt7484Ext7484 - 08:13pm
|TASK 2- Computers should never have been invented
2 - Aulia, for an 'agree or disagree' question like this, it is good that you've come up with the idea of choosing one...
Writing FeedbackUvyL26ichanpants89 - 06:32pm
|Internet marketing of four different business retails in New Zeland is depicted in the pie chart
2 - Nurul, I notice that you've been using similar pattern of writing Task 1 like I usually write. This is an outstanding improvement...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03ichanpants89 - 06:12pm
|Business leaders have the ability to create opportunities, build products and systems, and inspire o
NEW - Here is my essay I am working on to submit for a graduate school application MS in marketing. Still editing but wanted...
|People tend to have a limited time in doing face-to-face communication with their friends
5 - Hi Zelly, welcome to essay forum. For next writing practice, I hope you including a question so that we know whether...
Writing FeedbackzellyUvyL26 - 04:05pm
|The 20th century saw great change. In your opinion, what is one change that should be remembered?
2 - ... I found that the more most important change (...) is the different way of the communication by internet the internet...
Writing FeedbackNahid87Joydoc - 03:36pm
|TOEFL essay - New theater in the neighborhood. Sugesstions?
2 - r house is better ...[ is good idea]
On the other hand, if a new theater is built close to my apartment....
Writing FeedbackJoydocNahid87 - 02:37pm
|Should computer be invented? They have made a very vital impact on society.
3 - Hello; Has a very vital impact ( has made ..)
computer should not existed [ Computer should not been...
Writing FeedbackMeirama91Nahid87 - 02:27pm
|TOEFL essay for rating - why attend University?
10 - Education institutions play an important role in people's lives. Some people think that attending university provide knowledge.
while that might be true....
Writing FeedbackJoydocJoydoc - 01:26pm
|Foreign language study by children in the first education level is more effective than in second
5 - hello nurul,
i have some suggestions for your essay hopefully it will give new insight for you.. Admittedly, learning other...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03Meirama91 - 01:21pm
|IELTS TASK 2 ; Unemployment is a big disaster.
4 - Hello, Furqanda.
Here is some of my corrections. :) The rate of jobless person have has been in the...
Writing FeedbackBtihbk11Ilmi_03 - 01:10pm
|I strongly agree that gender could affect on the job position based on certain abilities.
5 - Hello, Rere.
It is a pleasure to read your essay.
Here is my suggestion "Most of believed that gender could...
Writing FeedbackmadmoiselleIlmi_03 - 01:01pm
|The transition of the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy between 2000 and 2050
4 - hello febri..
i just want to give you alternative sentence arrangement for your task, hopefully it can give another insight to...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12Meirama91 - 01:01pm
|Help me on the translated text of UNG vision and missions.
2 - Muhammad, here's what I have for your essay. Our Vision:
By the year of 2035, our masters program
Grammar, Usageakbartaufiq25justivy03 - 12:48pm
|Tourism is an excellent way to develop a country, but it can also cause harm. How can countries ensu
4 - Hi Azamat, I have read and understood your essay in a way that I fully agree to the points you mentioned. More...
Writing FeedbackAzamat98justivy03 - 12:37pm
|Comparison Three universities BU, USC and UB.
4 - Hi Hang, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, we hope you find this website a credible source of information as well as...
Writing Feedbackminicover93justivy03 - 12:04pm
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - People lived in small villages or big cities
4 - Hi Nurul, here's a take on the second paragraph of your essay. - On onethe other hand,
- I agree...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03justivy03 - 11:20am
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Nature vs Nurture in Sharping People' Personalities and Developments
4 - Hi Febriyani, here are additional insights for your essay. - one's personalitiespersonality and growths
- areis determined
Writing Feedbackpebzna12justivy03 - 09:02am
|IELTS TASK 2 - In some societies, fashion is becoming more and more important
4 - HI Rere, here's my take on the second and the third part your argument. 2nd paragraph
- In today society life,...
Writing Feedbackmadmoisellejustivy03 - 08:48am
|People should be allowed to work as long as they want? Agree or disagree
5 - Hi Adeel. Providing constructive and accurate feedbacks to all members is our mission, so no need to worry. Now I have several...
Writing FeedbackAdeel80akbartaufiq25 - 08:35am
|Energy Efficiency: Statement of Objectives for masters in microsystems engineering
4 - Murilo, as much as I loved reading your essay with it's easy to understand techniques on explaining micro systems engineering, I must...
Graduatemurajustivy03 - 08:26am
|Pupils should be trained how to become a precedent parent. IELTS
4 - On the other hand, becoming well-qualified parents does not require such parenthood ...
Children can learn it naturally throughout IN their adulthood...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03madmoiselle - 06:25am
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Competitive or Cooperative? Is competition the key to survive?
5 - Being competitive is an undeniable natural feeling that undeniable to be owned by FOR each individual. It can be seen from these...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12madmoiselle - 05:46am
|Different views about whether children experience competitions or not to be a well-qualified adult.
5 - "Children are a priceless asset. --> a powerful hook As such, the idea that children need to experience some competitions brings...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03RAY93 - 03:57am
|How this summer program and cultural experience will benefit you in your line of study
4 - Hy Kry,
I have some suggestions for the conclusion - All of these this would be a big culminated...
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|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Why Taking Part-time Job for Teenager are Beneficials?
5 - Hy, Febry.
I would like to give some suggestions :) ... effective ways for young adult to prepare for their future...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12Ilmi_03 - Yesterday
|IELTS Task 2- Computers should never have been invented
4 - Hi Novi, some of the editing from my side. You wrote well but is not able to form the sentences correctly with...
Writing FeedbackNoviSsakshijain - Yesterday
|IELTS - Technological advances in learning methods
5 - Hi Mal, glad to read your essay. I would like to comment about your intro and your summary
Technological advances in...
Writing FeedbackzarnoviNovi - Yesterday
|IELTS Task 2 (Practice) - Who Should Take Responsibility for Juvenile Attitude
4 - Febri, by doing many readings on many of your essays, I do realize something. The problems which made your sentence structures confusing...
Writing Feedbackpebzna12ichanpants89 - Yesterday
|Cam, the leader. A scholarship essay on leadership characteristics.
3 - Hmm, I started off liking your framing story, but I feel a bit betrayed at the end. Basically you were making...
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