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Legos -- MIT Significant Challenge Essay

NEW - MIT Essay- This is a rough draft of my essay for MIT. Any comments are welcome Tell us...

Undergraduatedjgvolt -
Describe your notion of "the good life."

2 - Recognizing that this is a very new rough draft, one thing you can do to make your essay stand out is...

Undergraduateastew5djgvolt - 01:27am
Being the only South Asian child in the australian neighborhood - USF UNDERGRADUATE COLLEGE ESSAY

4 - @vangiespen Okay that sounds good! Is there anything else I would have to change, add, or get rid of???...

Undergraduateshamrazamanshamrazaman - 01:27am
Common App- Describe a place or environment essay!! Advice?

2 - You can develop the essay a little further by trimming the content. The general substance of the essay is good, but...

Undergraduateaimankdjgvolt - 01:23am
medical treatment ielts test question

3 - You need to remove the first sentence of the second paragraph. Since, it seems like an introduction.

Writing Feedbackbteng011284Vns9x - 01:00am
Of Mice and Men theme essay help - The American Dream is and illusion

NEW - [i]My teacher gave me an essay question which is 'Explain an important theme in the text and how it was shown...

Book ReportsHannah_C -
Shenzhen The Best Led Street Light Manufacturer

NEW - As LED lighting applications mature, emerging markets to accelerate import LED lighting. Shenzhen Grephon technology Industry Co., Ltd.(Stevin ,8-6-1-3-4-8-0-7-3-3-8-0-5) formerly known...

Graduateluchao1976 -
IELTS TASK 2: Physical Education

1 - Young generations are nation's expectation in the future (a stop here) that have responsible life to make their country be better...

Writing FeedbackAnfaliaeddies - Yesterday
University of California Prompt2(Describe a skill or experience that you are really proud of)

NEW - Prompt 2: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this...

UndergraduateCaptainCook -
My stay at a boarding school in Eastern Nigeria (a symbol of my coming of age)

5 - Content wise, i think the story is pretty well done. you clearly stated how you transitioned from a child to an...

Undergraduatejjj90CaptainCook - Yesterday
TOEFL integrated writing: zebra mussel

2 - It's much better, thank you

Writing Feedbacknickyzhinickyzhi - Yesterday
Climate change is now an accepted threat to our planet

1 - Climate change has been hot issue discussion in the worldToday's issue is climate change. Government and members of public in all...

Writing FeedbackMann_mseddies - Yesterday
Helping a Friend with Anorexia - UC Prompt #1/Cornell CALS Supplement

6 - Sorry for taking so long to reply! If you aren't busy could you look over my revised version? It's generally...

Undergraduatedumbnerd123dumbnerd123 - Yesterday
First essay in 11 yrs,Personal statement for entrance into a graduate nursing program, help please!

1 - hello... I want to give you a feedback about your overall essay. Firstly, "layout" is very important! you should divide your...

Graduatefordeja1Anfalia - Yesterday
Public speaking was never my forte. Disappointment and Failure of a school assignment.

2 - Thanks for the helpful comment and corrections! I just have one question. Are there anymore grammatical errors that can be fixed?...

UndergraduateHumanManHumanMan - Yesterday
Chevening Scholarships: 4 questions essay. Personal statement and Academic Background

2 - Thanks ksinger, I will work on it and post a newer version of question 2 and my answers to question 3...

Scholarshipfp2014fp2014 - Yesterday
uf admissions essay, my notion of 'the good life'

4 - I think is a pretty good essay, but you should write more about the outcome you expect to gain from your...

UndergraduateKsingerfp2014 - Yesterday
Everyone is in his or her own "little world" - COMMON APP ESSAY

4 - In middle school, hormones are rampant in the hallways and excessive fumes of body spray in the locker rooms can choke...

Undergraduatesaiplayer1saiplayer1 - Yesterday
It all started with a joke - common app

10 - oh, i was saying the other kids were being sarcastic and didn't think i understand what "should" be talked...

Undergraduatefionaleeeeefionaleeeee - Yesterday
The Gulf of Mexico, engulfed in black oil - Prelude - Texas A&M

1 - This is excellent, inspired writing. I bet you will go through quite a process in the way you think about...

UndergraduateDuncanDonutEF_Kevin - Yesterday
futuristic city vs marvelous artifacts - historical building IELTS essay

1 - Hello there, In my opinion, the degree of modernizing a city lies on the effectiveness of a project in...

Writing Feedbackbteng011284Carolst - Yesterday
"Taipei Tokyo, how can I help you" - Inside my parent's take-out restaurant - Common App

13 - I was a US Senate Page and all of the Senate stuff is broadcasted live on CSPAN so my...

Undergraduateorangecoolattaorangecoolatta - Yesterday
'Outside is cold and dry' - Common App Essay - childhood to adulthood transformation

2 - OMG Thanks for your suggestion vangiespen! But rewrite the whole essay is not a good news at all.......ugh

Undergraduatedowotyyyyydowotyyyyy - Yesterday
A Vindication of the Rights of Women

1 - In that first paragraph, I think you can dig a little deeper and add another sentence about the IMPLICATIONS of this:...

Book Reportsmichelle10EF_Kevin - Yesterday
Select a cultural phenomenon - do you see any danger in our society's dependence?

2 - I like your straightforward writing style. Now I want to suggest a way to make your essays leave...

Writing Feedbacklink2EF_Kevin - Yesterday
I created an imaginary friend named Oliver - Undergraduate College Essay

2 - Ellen, you have one confused essay here. You need to pick only one of the topics that you have listed, and...

UndergraduateEllenFvangiespen - Yesterday
You Are what you give - University of Florida essay ''The good life''

1 - your last paragraph is a little too vague maybe extend on how you are going to contribute to the gator family....

Undergraduatejuligp97Ksinger - Yesterday
Relying on mobile phones may completely alienate us from the society and make us some trouble

1 - Saba, while you present good discussion points for your essay, there are parts that need to be adjusted for content because...

Writing Feedbackshavaktmvangiespen - Yesterday
TAKING ANOTHER STEP Dreams and inspirations are built as children observe the world surrounding them

1 - Irene, this is a highly interesting personal statement that just needs to be edited a bit. Let me help you with...

Undergraduatemhfu17vangiespen - Yesterday
My drawer; Shalwar kameez's, Pakistani dresses, rainbow of colors and designs - admission for U of M

2 - thanks so much! I wasn't actually born in Pakistan but I have a better idea of what to include now.

Undergraduaterafiqusorafiquso - Yesterday
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