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The impact of advances in technology on office workers productivity- TOEFL integrated essay

4 - I know that you were supposed to listen to an audio report. The problem with that is, as you said, we cannot...

Writing FeedbackNourNourvangiespen - 05:30pm
Teachers only teach the rules, but winners - winners make the rules. Personal statement!

15 - I'm just questioning that what do you think should I write something about financial hardship or not? I'm not arguing, I'm just...

UndergraduateRocky529440Rocky529440 - 02:28pm
Introducing myself and showing interest for apply. Study Plan for Chinese Government Scholarship

5 - Hello Noman, thank you so much for your feedback on my thread. I really appreciate it. Looking at your scholarship essay,...

ScholarshipHthmnfelixrioprabowo - 02:08pm
Earth-exploration energy is a high acceptable solution.

NEW - As Earth runs out of natural resources, we have started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this...

Writing FeedbackSaputra Putra -
Writing Task 1: the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university

3 - ... UK University over a three-year period, STARTED INfrom 2010 to 2012. As can be seen that boys and girls who were...

Writing Feedbackmita23Saputra Putra - 01:41pm
Writing Task 1: the condition of Stokeford village in 1930 and in 2010

6 - The maps illustrate the condition of Stokeford village 1930 and in 2010 over 80-year periode, started in 1930. Overall, it can...

Writing Feedbackmita23Saputra Putra - 01:38pm
To Learn and to Fix. UW-Seattle Transfer Personal Statement

2 - Hello Felix I can't really follow how studying accounting and finance will help in developing your country. from my point of view...

UndergraduatefelixrioprabowoHthmn - 10:27am
TASK 2: Starting Own Business, Do The Merits Outweigh The Drawbacks?

2 - Sri, your excellent discussion is only marred by some grammar problems. You have the right idea and you know how to present...

Writing Feedbacknuni11vangiespen - 10:00am
Water tank, pipe, storage tank, boiler, pump, and tube - heating system in a house

5 - It can be seen that how the components consist of which are the water tank...and tube which are connected through the process...

Writing Feedbackputri22nuni11 - 09:19am
By 2004, People preferred to buy more chicken than other meats. Fish and meat consumed - IELTS

4 - The lines graphs illustrates the needs NUMBER of fish and different kinds of meat consumed by people in a particular European country...

Writing FeedbackHervinHervin - 09:14am
Writing Task 1: how greenhouse gases are able to catch the sun's energy

5 - A suggestion for you, since writing task 1 is based on the given chart or diagram, try to make at least 3...

Writing Feedbackmita23nuni11 - 09:10am
Application for Master of Design program - Illinois Institute of Technology

2 - Yan, this is an essay that is sure to either wow the reviewer due to your extensive professional experience, or bore him...

Graduatesoapnooodlevangiespen - 05:40am
Visiting a market - Writing, English learner - B1/B2 level

2 - Ediz, as much as possible, do not use exclamation points when you are writing a descriptive essay. It should flow calmly and...

Writing Feedbackediz1vangiespen - 05:26am
Since 20th century, some countries have started exploring the space

2 - Ahmad, your written composition is so confusing in content that it makes my head hurt just reading what you have said because...

Writing FeedbackSaputra Putravangiespen - 05:16am
TASk 2: Computer can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations

2 - ... computerS plays A crucial role in facilitating ASSISTING children to figure out the number. IN NUMBER PROBLEM SOLVING. It...

Writing Feedbackswara86vangiespen - 04:51am
The number of inhabitants increased rapidly in the period of 1900-2000 in different world regions

4 - A breakdown of the FIGURE FOR people living in the world in different WORLDWIDE regions in 1990 and 2000, a OVER...

Writing Feedbackaflah15Saputra Putra - 03:16am
A breakdown of international trade of transports that use combination of both fuel and electricity

6 - A breakdown of THE FIGURE FOR international trade of transports that using combination of both fuel and electricity in Japan, United...

Writing Feedbackaflah15Saputra Putra - 03:12am
ISECG - DOES SPACE EXPLORATION RELATE TO NATIONAL PRIDE? IELTS TASK 2

2 - Dynar, when you state your opinion in the opening statement, you cannot merely claim the reverse of whatever discussion you are presenting....

Writing Feedbackdynaranjanivangiespen - 02:59am
What you would like to be for one day / Why Franklin & Marshall? F&M Supplements

2 - Calvin, for question number one, you should be thinking out of the box and way beyond a personal motive for the date....

Undergraduateleesanity7vangiespen - 02:44am
Describe qualifications / abilities and attributes. Application to the Kelley School of Business

2 - Abrar, you should vary the opening sentences of your paragraphs. You can't always say "I believe" because that causes reading fatigue. Try...

Undergraduatelurkerotherwisevangiespen - 12:20am
"Renovated Habits". Low-GPA; Essay needed for admission; Need revision

4 - Corey, the essay has way too many redundancies. You keep going around in circles saying the same thing when what you should...

Undergraduatecorey3236vangiespen - 12:10am
Internet: repetitive, violent and fraudulent information - it is uncomfortable for us to use it now

5 - Menglu, you have a slight misunderstanding of the prompt. The prompt indicates; "Some people say that the Internet provides people with a...

Writing FeedbackCrystal812vangiespen - Yesterday
Letter of Self-Introduction for KGSP Scholarship Program

6 - Hello, Vania I think your letter reflect a simple personal, I really like the way you used in describing your backgrounds and...

ScholarshipvanianuzHthmn - Yesterday
"I will embrace today's difficult tasks, take off my coat, and make dust in the world" - improve SOP

21 - hi louisa, thanks for such a prompt reply. I think ill submit my application with more confidence now. I am grateful for...

Graduateabhishek3abhishek3 - Yesterday
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Fish and meat consumption in European country.

2 - Ahmad, pay attention to the way that you develop your paragraph. this format that you have right now is definitely too tightly...

Writing Feedbackridzkiekkyvangiespen - Yesterday
Common app activity---Spending time in solving problems or thinking something for more than an hour.

11 - You can do whatever you want in the activity. After all, you are the one preparing to apply to college. In my...

UndergraduateMr pitbullvangiespen - Yesterday
IELTS TASK 2 : SPACE EXPLORATION FOR A SOLUTION OF NATURAL RESOURCES DEPLETION

2 - Dynar, you managed to explain your point of view and even threw in some very important names and accomplishments in your defense....

Writing Feedbackdynaranjanivangiespen - Yesterday
IELTS 2 - The Most Effective Time for young Pupils to Teach them Foreign Language

3 - To masterING foreign language in very young age is the most beneficial achievement in modern era. ...children have a difficulty to...

Writing Feedbackfahmisadjadynaranjani - Yesterday
One of the benefits of growing up in a developing country was that I got to see my city be built.

4 - Waqas, your essay revision works. However, I believe that it will flow better and become stronger if we switch around some paragraphs....

Undergraduatewaqametuvangiespen - Yesterday
IELTS task 1: electricity generator using sea waves

5 - ... the mechanism of this devices to produce HARNESS electricity from sea waves ..the structure consistS of a chamber, a column...

Writing Feedbackangga93dynaranjani - Yesterday
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