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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Consequences of improved medical care

2 - Hey dcho, here are some suggestions and personal thoughts for your references 1. I personally don't agree living longer and life...

Writing Feedbackdcho23Ethanchen1998 - 04:54am
Writing Task 2: the advantages and disadvantages of people who are living longer due to medical care

2 - -The effect of this improvement is that refer to? citizens are surviving longer and their quality of life is inclining. -as...

Writing Feedbackmita23putri22 - 04:28am
The proportion of monthly temperatures and the averages number of hours of sunshine per year

2 - ... that in AT the beginning and... temperatures has HAD THE same pattern in which Sydney has HAD ...

Writing Feedbackputri22vangiespen - 04:12am
Writing Task 1: The average temperatures per a month and total sunshine per a year

3 - Thanks for your suggestions....

Writing Feedbackmita23mita23 - 04:04am
Agree or disagree: Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.

9 - Hi Menglu, i think you did well. but there are some correction from me, i hope it can help you I...

Writing FeedbackCrystal812putri22 - 04:02am
the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy

NEW - one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. do you think...

Writing FeedbackADIE08 -
IELTS QUESTION, IMPROVEMENT MEDICAL CARE

NEW - Q:One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expetancy is increasing. Do you think...

Writing Feedbackanita11 -
'scene on a TV'. University of Florida - I'm super nervous for my status let me know what you think!

4 - I grew up in humble beginnings to beginnings in a family of seven. Yet at the same time, (with coma)...

UndergraduateGabADIE08 - 03:48am
Aetas people. Transfer Essay Common App Prompt: provide a statement that addresses your reasons..."

3 - that this is the right time for me to gain a different perspective in order to reach a new understanding of world...

UndergraduatedaisyladADIE08 - 03:44am
Over the 50-year period, the women role has transformed in several countries.

4 - Hallo wahyutri, i think; it is better for your conclusion to follow the pattern, like writing the closing which is the paraphrase...

Writing Feedbackwahyutri13anita11 - 03:30am
The Level of Three Predominant Exports in Southland

4 - In any case CASES, dairy products experience ... case is included in countable noun, so you have to put S when you...

Writing FeedbackMardy17mita23 - 03:26am
IELTS TASK 2 - People live longer due to the improving of medical care

4 - If the population in the world have a long life, without conjunction, there are two verb, have and can create it can...

Writing Feedbackputri22dcho23 - 03:24am
Perceived and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime, indicated in varied-variables

3 - ... perceived 2010/11; and actual 2010/11, are rangked as the followers ... ... noticeable account in which the actual 2010/11 was the...

Writing Feedbacksholihin84mita23 - 03:17am
TASk 2: Computer can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations

4 - I believe that focus on learning basic mathematics is very important to children because they will ... i think that it will...

Writing Feedbackswara86mita23 - 03:08am
Personal essay---In the journey of life, time writes so many stories, so many characters emerge,

6 - I give you word that I'll listen instead of arguing. I argued the previous one because you told to completely change the...

UndergraduateSubhasisSubhasis - 03:01am
There are several reasons why criminal activities always happen in many parts of the world.

3 - For instance, more than a third of Indonesian population and more than 47 million Americans living in poverty. where is the main...

Writing Feedbackamrillahmk31mita23 - 02:59am
'LaGuardia was the most popular' - TASK 1: The number of travelers using airports in New York city

5 - Hello, Although your essay has great facts, it would be easier for the reader if you had a clearer starting point....

Writing Feedbackaflah15daisylad - 02:09am
Modern communication gives great tools to connect people but it's less personal than direct relation

4 - Dear Wahyu, I appreciate your fruitful advice. Certainly, I regret the example of advantages is weak although some sentences in the...

Writing FeedbackOSMOSM - Yesterday
TAMU Statement of Purpose Essay, Biochemisty Major. Not sure if prompt is answered correctly.

8 - Sorry, that is against the forum regulations. You will just have to post the essay here again for editing. This is an...

UndergraduateMansif13vangiespen - Yesterday
I have graduated a Bachelor of Science in geology - INTERNATIONAL MASTER'S SCHOLARSHIP application

4 - Hi Christopher, I was happy to help. Yes, there are grammatical problems that exist in your paper. However, I did not attempt...

ScholarshipChristopherSvangiespen - Yesterday
It's no longer a dream today. SPACE EXPLORATION WITH NATIONAL PRIDE RATHER THAN INTERNATIONAL EFFORT

3 - Tau, from reading your essay, I can see that you wrote it after having read the other essays here at the forum....

Writing Feedbackpikulvangiespen - Yesterday
Greatest learning outcome and impact of the experience

4 - Thank you @vangiespen I rewrote my essay after reinterpreting the prompt. In my new essay, I shifted the focus of my essay...

Writing Feedbacksgsg9sgsg9 - Yesterday
Obedience, an undesirable, yet unavoidable human feature?

3 - Thank you very much for you feedback. It shall b taken seriously. I will surely readjust the introduction and the conclusion and...

Writing Feedbackyahyasafe7yahyasafe7 - Yesterday
'a bunch of people who felt danger' - The Percentage of Crime in 2009 to 2011

2 - Fariz, most of the essay formatting is correct and acceptable. However, you failed to follow the correct essay format for your conclusion...

Writing Feedbackfariz10vangiespen - Yesterday
'there is still discrimination against women' - how this problem evaluated to the present days?

2 - Fariz, this is a grammatically error filled essay. However, it works in terms of the discussion presented. Once the reviewer manages to...

Writing Feedbackfariz10vangiespen - Yesterday
The number of citizens who get ill from consuming unhealthy diet is increasing in some countries

2 - Riska, your essay is a bit repetitive. You actually present your thesis statement twice in this essay. Honestly, your second paragraph, which...

Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03vangiespen - Yesterday
What interesting offers Master's in finance at Frankfurt school? Why did you choose this programme?

2 - Ashish, you just spent the word count constantly saying the same thing. There was nothing informative in the essay that gives the...

Graduateashish4495vangiespen - Yesterday
There is now greater equality for women compared to those in the past fifty years.

3 - Hi Pay, You have good writing skill. However, you miss the question. I think your statement in the first paragraph does not...

Writing FeedbackPey28fariz10 - Yesterday
Task 1 - Perceived and Actual Crime in 2009 and 2010

3 - Hi Wahyu, I found some grammatical error and the most important you did not illustrate the graph properly. In my...

Writing Feedbackwahyutri13fariz10 - Yesterday
The equality of gender does not obtain a great achievement in many societies

3 - Hi Erin, In my opinion you have some gramatical error and you have to repair it. Besides, I think your body 1...

Writing Feedbackerin24fariz10 - Yesterday
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