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IELTS TASK 2 - Children are engaged in some kind of paid work

NEW - In many countries , children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while...

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IELTS: Building new sports facilities is the best way for public health??

3 - Hello tk0308, maybe you can rewrite your introduction and conclusion. For introduction you can use paraphrase from the sentence...

Writing Feedbacktk0308Bayuwibowo - 12:32am
Violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. IELTS

3 - Hi Hung, let me rewrite the introduction In this contemporary era, the media such as television and video game...

Writing FeedbackHungBayuwibowo - 12:19am
IELTS TASK 1 - World Population by Region, 1900 and 200

NEW - This pie chart illustrates the comparison of world inhabitants divided by each countinents between 1900 and 2000. Overall it can be...

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IELTS task 1: The population of fishers and exported fish in the world

4 - - In 1970, the highest number of world fishermen was living in Asia witnessed rose significantly, from 9 millions to 24...

Writing FeedbackveaeniaBayuwibowo - Yesterday
A breakdown of the process of water cycle. IELTS Task 1

4 - Hello, let me give the feedback for your improvement. - Please, you can use other sentence conectors such as whilst,...

Writing FeedbackveaeniaBayuwibowo - Yesterday
Loyola Marymount Sup: Situation in which you used critical thinking

2 - Hello, I would like to help you with your essay. Unfortunately, when I read the first paragraph I knew it...

Undergraduatea7lamajro7lcturn87 - Yesterday
help me correct my introduction for my speech class about myself

2 - I can help you with your first paragraph. I think you should introduce yourself by stating, "I was born and...

Speecheschopstix102lcturn87 - Yesterday
Teachers are more influent than friends

3 - For introductory paragraph, you better put the thesis statement in the end. Let me give a try: It is hard...

Writing FeedbackBangbangshintacandrade - Yesterday
Foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Advantage outweight disadavantages

2 - I can help your essay. I would like to focus on word choice and meaning: 1st paragraph: The first...

Writing Feedbackdanielwonglcturn87 - Yesterday
Horror Essay continuation of the book : The house on the Brink. Need more ideas.

NEW - Hi All, Thanks for using time to read my essay , I welcome negative comments. I would appreciate on how to...

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Zoo has no useful purpose. Do you agree or disagree?

3 - Hi nil ! I think for these kind of essay topics, you are suppose to pick a side. If...

Writing FeedbacknilSamuelsam123 - Yesterday
Why should children learn a foreign language so early?

2 - Hello, I can help you with your essay. 1st paragraph: I would like to suggest that you change this...

Writing Feedbacktk0308lcturn87 - Yesterday
Without parents assistance children can easily be affected by bad habits, lifestyle and cultures

8 - This essay is well done. You have an intro conclusion and three body paragraphs. final tests, However... The...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthiet1993EF_Carol - Yesterday
IELTS essay: Age limit for retirement is 50 in some countires and 65 to 70 in others

4 - This is my little tip for IELTS writing. The task2 should be over 250 words. And as repeated words could...

Writing FeedbackBalajiskbtk0308 - Yesterday
IELTS TASK 2 : The problem of over using internet

5 - I recommend you not to use many "WE". I had been thought it from my IELTS teacher since I started to...

Writing Feedbackgo0905tk0308 - Yesterday
I've been invited to a charity TV show where I saw the embarrassments and tears in children's eyes

4 - Hi everyone, here is my second draft for my essay. The words should be controlled within the length of 600-650 words,...

Undergraduateundergra801undergra801 - Yesterday
Analyze an Argument Task: Physical Fitness of Corpora's Citizens

NEW - Hi there, I've been preparing GRE writing by myself for a long time, with little improvement. I badly need your...

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Freshman prompt on how my world has formed me - UC application essay.

NEW - The prompt is to describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell...

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A remote village brings the kind people, inexpensive, healthy food can be consumed in a countryside

3 - This intro (first paragraph) is too complicated. It is always good to keep your paragraph succinct and to the point. Let...

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowoeddies - Aug 30, 2015
I need HUMOR; roommate letter / 'No curfew!' / CIA mission - Stanford Essay

5 - so which one would you recommend? @justivy03

Letterskrobledo226krobledo226 - Aug 30, 2015
Describe a conflict in your life and the skills and resources you used to resolve it.

5 - Well, @abby, please don't call yourself an idiot because there's no such thing. We all make mistakes and everyday is a...

Undergraduateabbyjonesssjustivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
Staying Analog in a Digital World (Eng102 Research Paper)

4 - - Now to closeIn conclusion, I'm all for these advances we've had in the society. - In many great ways,...

Research PapersDano84justivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
'Who do you want to be' - My answers would vary daily, from baker to ballerina

6 - - ....every child is asked a countless amount of times. - ...have to make when college camecome around. -...

Undergraduatepowwowjustivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
New classes, new school. I was finally a "big kid" in my eyes. ApplyTexas collegiate essay prompt A.

4 - @Castro, well done dear!!! You've got one good essay here and it's entertaining as well as classy. I'd like to share...

UndergraduateCastro98justivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
A formal letter I want to write to a notebook provider

4 - - Dear Sir/Ma'am - I successfullypurchased successfully a notebook.. - ..from your own shop three days ago. -...

Lettersluongk3njustivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
Growing up in Africa can be both a challenge and a blessing. College Admission Essay

4 - - ....being told we were able to go tovisit the computer... - You go to a certain classes once or...

Undergraduatelili_eritreanjustivy03 - Aug 30, 2015
Brain Injury Research Paper

4 - I can help you with some more changes to your essay. There were some paragraphs, that needed slight changes. I tried...

Research Paperskay2145689lcturn87 - Aug 30, 2015
Essay: Travelling & Tourism - if you don't afraid to take the risk then go ahead

2 - I can help you with your essay. 1st paragraph: Some people may see the positive side of travelling to...

Writing FeedbackNamisaChanlcturn87 - Aug 30, 2015
First time writing an essay for admission to Master Degree in MEDIA MANAGEMENT at Fordham Uni.

5 - @ lcturn87 thanks a lot!:) i appreciate your extensive feedback and shall correct my essay accordingly. Thank you for pointing out...

Graduatehelenedaheleneda - Aug 30, 2015
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