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Why I Choose Georgia Tech to study chemical Engineering essay

2 - HI vangiespen, I am trying to transfer to Georgia Tech and here it is its prompt. Why are you interested in...

Graduatemyngoc311myngoc311 - 09:53pm
Cultural shock in Dubai; teach myself a new skill or concept

4 - Hi Cheung, well, I already offered you some guide questions in my previous response that should help you better develop the...

Undergraduatenicolezmh1997vangiespen - 09:49pm
NYU. A reality come true or just a dream school?- Help on my NYU supplement

3 - Harrison, the best way to approach this essay will be to engage the admissions officer in a discussion about how the...

Undergraduatespyr0xsvangiespen - 09:28pm
My dad, my hero

1 - Hi Maria, can you do me a favor and provide me with the essay prompt for your work? I can't...

Undergraduatemaria96vangiespen - 09:17pm
No one had taught me how to reach out to others when in need of help - MSU Application Essay

3 - Muhammad, don't use any quotes from Batman, specially if you do not specifically refer to that quote in the essay. Yes,...

UndergraduateMKhanvangiespen - 08:58pm
Stanford Short Answers: So they can get to know me better.

4 - Martin, I believe that you should maximize the use of the word count in your response to every question. 50 words...

Undergraduatemartin16vangiespen - 08:53pm
"It's rare for someone so young to contract shingles, but it's still possible" - I stuck in there...

3 - The shingles story is not developing well in my opinion. I also feel that it is not strong enough a prompt...

UndergraduateFullofSeoulvangiespen - 08:46pm
"Allowing you to travel on your own is the last sliver of the cake of childhood"; Failed trip to NYC

2 - No. Absolutely not. Please do not use this essay as your coming of age story. A coming of age story must...

Undergraduatesage28vangiespen - 08:42pm
Why and what motivates you to volunteer for Bina Antarbudaya? > volunteer exchange scholarship

2 - Your motivation and reasons for joining this volunteer activity is very shallow. You need to show a personal connection or cause...

Scholarshipmardiansyahvangiespen - 08:37pm
A time when I had to tutor a teenager of different background

2 - Thanks for the feedback. If I make the change it will be "... challenges of me such as tuition" which...

Undergraduatesampunk9494sampunk9494 - 08:14pm
Contributing to Macalester community, personally and academically

3 - Thank you yazoo and nicolezmh1997 for the feedback. I appreciate it. I was just wondering if vangiespen could evaluate...

Undergraduatesampunk9494sampunk9494 - 08:13pm
IELTS 2: study alone or study with a group

NEW - Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific...
[IELTS] Writing Task 1 - The Unemployment Rate in 2 Advanced Countries

NEW - Question: The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write a...

Graduateruwchii -
INVITATION - we have arranged a meeting - a google hang out.

1 - Helia, I am not sure as to how to edit this invitation for you. Kindly supply the directions for this letter....

Lettersheavenplayvangiespen - 06:37pm
[IELTS] Writing Task 2 - Using Air Transport to Export Fruit and Vegetable

NEW - The increasing use of air transport to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or out of...

Graduateruwchii -
Extra-curricular activity of being a listener and petition writer - inspirational life experience

1 - This essay will be vastly improved as an extra curricular activity narrative if you spoke more of how you completed your...

Undergraduatevoocatchervangiespen - 06:35pm
Some views and opinion about learning methods for children - IELTS

3 - I guess this paragraph is a one idea paragraph. In my own opinion, you have to develop your paragraph to...

Writing FeedbackPJmustbebetterruwchii - 06:29pm
Humility leads people to fulfillment in the most authentic way possible - Transition into Adulthood

6 - Philipe, I happen to know someone who had a Bar mitzvah and I believe that aside from this actual ceremony itself,...

UndergraduateCharphilvangiespen - 06:29pm
The sincerest of gestures can bring about the simplest of pleasures: a smile

7 - Brooke, let's go over the word count for now. I would like to develop a certain idea in the essay that...

Undergraduateasdfghjklyeahvangiespen - 06:21pm
Whenever someone asks me why I want to pursue medicine, I always reply that it's part of who I am

4 - This is a definite improvement Danah. You have managed to show us the contrasting worlds that you come from while explaining...

UndergraduateDanah96vangiespen - 06:17pm
Is it more important to have an enjoyable life than to earn a lot of money? [ielts writing task 2]

6 - in my opinion, you should avoid the repetition words in your writing regarding getting higher mark in IELTS. The variation...

Writing FeedbackLFAleruwchii - 06:14pm
During my junior year in high school, I volunteered at an orphanage to teach English to the children

2 - Adonay, it is unfortunate that the final act that you chose to take in this particularly compelling and quite controversial case...

Undergraduateatothez1000vangiespen - 06:12pm
Journey from Entrepreneur to Experienced developer - SOP looking for MS in Information Systems

2 - Chandra, you never write a statement of purpose using sub headings. That is sure to hurt your application because you are...

Graduatesekharcsvangiespen - 06:03pm
IELTS writing task 1 - Main energy sources for Burnland, 2006

2 - there is no necessary to add "to" after "in addition".

Undergraduatemkthanhruwchii - 05:54pm
An idea that has been important to my intellectual development - multidisciplinary nature of subject

5 - This is certainly a tremendously well developed answer when your word count is taken into consideration. Please, feel free to use...

Undergraduatevoocatchervangiespen - 05:54pm
A blistering mallet increases its velocity and with it, its trepidation

NEW - What Ignited My Pursuit of Success and (Genuine) Happiness This is an essay for the Common App which I have...

GraduateJesusLM2 -
Questions 1-6 - openings and finaless only

NEW - Make introduction and conclusion for these backgrounds below. 1. Question: Some people think that it is more effective for students to...
Vietnam seemed to be an atypical summer vacation destination - Common App Essay

9 - No problem! I actually think I may just scrap this essay all together. would you mind looking at my other essay...

Undergraduatesage28sage28 - 04:48pm
Converting the Obstacles into Fuel for Success

7 - Attached on merging: Lacking the presence of my mother - what Ignited My Pursuit of Success and (Genuine) Happiness?...

UndergraduateJesusLM2JesusLM2 - 04:16pm
The research of electrochemical reduction of CO2 really attracts me; SOP for Chemical Engineering

NEW - I am applying MEng in Chemical Engineering. I am studying Chemistry in University of Birmingham now. Can anyone give me some...

GraduateJenney123 -
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