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Arts management field, Letter of recommendation; Master Program. Light, sound control, house manager

4 - I add some sentence to emphasize what I actually did, the new sentences will be marked in bold. If you (all the...

Letterseric41061eric41061 - 09:50pm
Receiving this scholarship would bring me one step closer to making my biggest dream a reality.

3 - Hi Summer. I think you've got a good start with this draft. 250 words is not a lot of space to convey...

UndergraduatesummerhollinsHiddengrace - 08:12pm
I have graduated a Bachelor of Science in geology - INTERNATIONAL MASTER'S SCHOLARSHIP application

8 - Dear all Please help me to improve my essay Thanks...

ScholarshipChristopherSChristopherS - 04:59pm
How to write a short structured, autobiography - AppState Hayes Music School Essay

NEW - Your biography - Tell us about yourself in this essay, using the format outlined below. Paragraph 1: Where you are from, what...

Undergraduatemynormalface -
In many countries, people do not recycle their rubbish as much as they could. Why? What can be done?

NEW - In the present age, recycling rubbish is playing a increasingly important role in the world. But at the meantime why people do...

Writing Feedbackpouriatiz -
'adolescents should comprehend the reasons of going abroad' - Gap Year, Advantages and Disadvantages

2 - I am preparing for the TOEFL so welcome to the club Mark :) I like your writing style it is excellent....

Writing Feedbackieltsstudent22NourNour - 03:14pm
Attending university is very common nowadays. The reasons vary from people to people.

2 - The reasons vary from people to people one person to another Some want to gain knowledge, some want to experience...

Writing FeedbackameefuletraNourNour - 02:50pm
GeorgiaTech Transfer Essays (Civil Engineering)

3 - hi Hiddengrace, I really appreciate your guidance. Regarding essay 1, ive written a similar essay for uiuc could you check it out...

Undergraduatewaqametuwaqametu - 02:22pm
Animal-assisted therapy is beneficial. TOEFL integrated essay

2 - You have written one paragraph to summarize lecture and other to summarize reading. Instead, try to write some points of lecture and...

Writing FeedbackNourNourameefuletra - 01:20pm
Personal Statement for LLM graduate to get a JD degree. Aiming at BU and BC.

NEW - Here is my PS to law school. I already have an LLM degree from Tulane but wanna get a JD. It would...

GraduateScarlettwu -
Lady Macbeth character analysis - how does she change?

NEW - In Macbeth by William Shakespeare, Lady Macbeth is very central to the development of the plot of the story. Lady Macbeth changes...

Book Reportsasilver427 -
Motivation letter for Masters Program on Computational Mechanics

NEW - Hi there! Can anyone help me with my motivation letter? Are my ideas good or not? Should I add something, or shorten...

Graduateuzbboy -
One brush at a time. KGSP Introductory letter.

4 - Well, I think a personal experience can be great if you can connect it to the reason behind going into your chosen...

Scholarshipjoshuagarcia91Hiddengrace - 11:10am
One of the benefits of growing up in a developing country was that I got to see my city be built.

5 - Made some changes. how can i improve it further. thanks Growing up watching documentaries like "An Inconvenient Truth", I wanted to...

Undergraduatewaqametuwaqametu - 06:51am
SOP for Master's program in Earth Science Engineering, on Hungarian Government Scholarship.

NEW - To observe and learn is fundamental to all humans but the experience is more profound when a person is brought up in...

ScholarshipMustahsan -
Division of schools in the United States. TOEFL integrated essay

2 - The write explains the division of schools in the United States. However, the professor explores the disadvantages of this system. First...

Writing FeedbackNourNoursgsg9 - 12:11am
Transfer admission essay for Georgia Tech. I need help forming an excellent essay which I lack of.

6 - Hi VANGIESPEN and everyone else, Your feedback has been very helpful. I revised the essay, and I am now below the...

UndergraduateJuanSebastianRJuanSebastianR - Yesterday
Leadership, progress, and service during the past three years. Georgia Tech admission essay.

NEW - Good evening everyone. I am applying for transfer to Georgia Tech to become an Aerospace Engineer with the ultimate goal of...

UndergraduateJuanSebastianR -
Aetas people. Transfer Essay Common App Prompt: provide a statement that addresses your reasons..."

4 - Hi Daisy! I think you have a good start here. I'm not going to give you grammar, wording and punctuation edits but...

UndergraduatedaisyladHiddengrace - Yesterday
People are living longer due to medical care - is it a positive trend?

4 - You have a good writing style however as Louisa said you have to pay attention to your word choice. their quality...

Writing Feedbackmita23NourNour - Yesterday
The Level of Three Predominant Exports in Southland

5 - and THEY ARE is measured in the billions of pounds. it can be obviously seen that THE international tourism sector...

Writing FeedbackMardy17NourNour - Yesterday
The impact of advances in technology on office workers productivity- TOEFL integrated essay

5 - It is okey Louise :) I find all the feedbacks in this forum beneficial especially yours. I understand that uploading audio files...

Writing FeedbackNourNourNourNour - Yesterday
The number of citizens who get ill from consuming unhealthy diet is increasing in some countries

3 - Hi RISKACHA03! I agree with VANGIESPEN's feedback on your essay. It does sound a bit repititive. I took the time...

Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03JuanSebastianR - Yesterday
In many countries, the life expectancy is used as indicators to monitor the health of population

5 - Andri, it will be in your best interest to revise the whole essay that you have written. A number of reasons exist...

Writing Feedbackdcho23vangiespen - Yesterday
Good health is one of the crucial life components. Pros and cons of the medical care improvement.

2 - Anita, when you say "living increase and life expectancy", you actually mean the same thing, which is a longer life. Therefore, you...

Writing Feedbackanita11vangiespen - Yesterday
Developing of medical system in many sides keep people healthier and their life expectancy is higher

3 - Adie, I agree with Carol, when you develop the essay, make sure to use a short outline to help you develop your...

Writing FeedbackADIE08vangiespen - Yesterday
Application for Master of Design program - Illinois Institute of Technology

3 - Thank you for the advice Louisa and they are very helpful. I'm working on the revision and will share it with you...

Graduatesoapnooodlesoapnooodle - Yesterday
Personal essay---In the journey of life, time writes so many stories, so many characters emerge,

8 - Yes, we are in agreement on that tone? Make the essay sound more mature and insightful. Any other explanation you...

UndergraduateSubhasisSubhasis - Yesterday
The proportion of monthly temperatures and the averages number of hours of sunshine per year

2 - ... that in AT the beginning and... temperatures has HAD THE same pattern in which Sydney has HAD ...

Writing Feedbackputri22vangiespen - Yesterday
New York - lowest temperatures monthly, but longest hours of sunshine comparing to London and others

3 - Thanks for your suggestions....

Writing Feedbackmita23mita23 - Yesterday
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