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Persuasive letter (a candidate for a prize of a trip)

3 - Hi, I strongly suggest you to turn on the grammatical corrections and pay attention to your punctuation marks since this is...

Lettersjennym82Trias - 05:20am
Personal Statement of UC Riverside Public History MA. Interactivity in exhibit enviroments.

3 - My undergraduate experience experiences has provided me more than a mere introduction to the field, establishing a foundation to build advanced...

GraduatefoxyhTrias - 05:14am
Valedictorian Essay (Grade 9) (Strongest Candidate)

3 - To make the readers grasp your idea more easily, it is better to introduce your idea at the beginning of each...

ScholarshipCeldricPTrias - 05:05am
Rich countries should give the poorer other types of help instead of a money. How do you see that?

4 - Hi, I would like to share the basic structure in writing an IELTS essay for writing task 2 from my lecturer:...

Writing FeedbackbaochauTrias - 04:50am
A student must like a teacher in order to learn from the teacher.

3 - Para 1: This is good. Yet, the sentence is too close to the prompt. Why don't you try to paraphrase it?...

Writing FeedbackNapheddies - 03:54am
'Since my early days as a child I was fond of exploring how things work' - Applying for Master Study

8 - There are only slight changes that I have suggested. These are only minor grammar changes that will help your essay. Read...

Graduategondam7lcturn87 - Yesterday
IELTS Writing Task 2 Scoring: People Living in Debts to Buy Unimportant Things

3 - Nowadays, it is easier for people to lend a specific amount of money to purchase products that are not really important....

Writing FeedbackTriasfoxyh - Yesterday
IELTS Writing Task 2 Simulation: Parents Spend Little Time with Children Nowadays

2 - - Rephrasing; In this day and age, children get smaller portion of their parents' time to be spent together, compared with...

Writing FeedbackTriasjustivy03 - Yesterday
The levels of movie rentals and sales in VHS, DVD and Blu-ray formats

2 - - The most significant facts tothat emerge are movie rentals and VHS sales thatslowly fell, while the number of movies which...

Writing FeedbackTriasjustivy03 - Yesterday
Ghoulish House Description

4 - In addition to prior comments, I would like to remind about a few typos and punctuations here: Shattered glass lies around...

Writing FeedbackErin WTrias - Yesterday
Short essay - Is it better to stay on the safe side?

3 - Hi, first of all I really enjoy how you can manage to construct such flow and make the readers understand each...

Writing FeedbackhaikaTrias - Yesterday
IELTS Writing Task 1 Simulation: World Population by Region, 1900 and 2000

6 - Para 2: - Sentence 3; write Europe including/ which was included/with Russia. - Sentence 4; Lastly (DELETE). For the time...

Writing FeedbackTriaseddies - Yesterday
Explaining what is my motivation for being a Physician Assistant.

6 - I rearranged the essay and feel it flows much smoother. I'm struggling with the transition sentence opening the newly arranged 4th...

GraduateHjoy3026Hjoy3026 - Yesterday
There is no doubt that most of the people consider health as a major part of their life

9 - Hi, kindly find my feedback on your first paragraph. There is a contradiction in your first sentence: There is no...

Writing FeedbackAmir1987Trias - Yesterday
Learning how to be a good member in society through the (obligatory?) community service program

4 - Some people believe that it should be to become a compulsory part of high school curriculum so that student can learn...

Writing FeedbackMuhammadImhoTrias - Yesterday
Argument Essay: Environmental Sustainability

4 - Here is a structure to your consideration: - Opening paragraph: appoint certain main issue concerning global warming; state your position in...

Essaysenglish10138Trias - Yesterday
IELTS Writing Task 1 - Changes In The World Population Between 1900 and 2000

9 - Helllllooo Hetty, a few points; Para 1: - Here do you need to write a 2-sentence overview. By doing so,...

Writing FeedbackHettymskeddies - Yesterday
Is it appropriate to use of animals for human benefits?

4 - In the first paragraph, you failed to introduce the prompt by not stating what the human benefits mean here. Surely, this...

Writing FeedbackTriaseddies - Yesterday
My most memorable holidays

3 - Hi, NatyAC. I'll also try to help you with your the grammar and word choice in your essay: My...

UndergraduateNatyACChristineB - May 20, 2015
My main aim is to become a PhD in plasma physics. Motivation letter writing.

6 - new changes I am writing to apply for the Doctoral Program XXX. I have always been planning my future, building...

Graduateandrewkasilovandrewkasilov - May 20, 2015
The world's energy consumption in 2010

5 - Oh Hi my roommate @thutyedaniel! I would like to give you some suggestions : 1) it is evident that...

Writing FeedbackthutyedanielHettymsk - May 20, 2015
An undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne writes the Motivation Letter for Brasil exchange

2 - - I am currently an undergraduate student of Telecom Saint-Etienne at the University of Saint-Etienne. ( be careful of word usage...

Lettersfranklin62justivy03 - May 20, 2015
SOP for studying master in telecommunication and electronics in Germany

5 - Merged: sop to study master in telecommunication and electronics in Germany I'm applying for a master and this is...

Graduategondam7gondam7 - May 20, 2015
Heartbroken and in a state of deep shock

6 - this means that they are very sad of something that they cannot believe it happened

Grammar, UsageVns9xgondam7 - May 20, 2015
Event that changes life - need ideas for following topics

6 - #1 can be something like a trip to country with a different culture, ex: india or losing someone you love...

Essayshunhanngondam7 - May 20, 2015
Learning process requires to perform tasks using both mental and physical endurance; Fulbright

2 - - ...I was quite an average grader student. -As he was also contestingbuying for admission in engineeringthe college of...

Scholarshipmusaibjanjustivy03 - May 20, 2015
Is it better study domestic or abroad?

2 - Hi, @nguyenvannam I would like to give you some corrections and comments.. Your writing is quite interesting but there are...

Writing FeedbacknguyenvannamHettymsk - May 20, 2015
International market access in order to produce more goods and to generate solid profits for regions

4 - For instance, economical help from the United States to demerit regions in Indonesia has gradually reduced since = because ( so...

Writing Feedbacksiddiqumarnguyenvannam - May 19, 2015
TV Programmes Watched in Australia - women prefer to watch reality shows more than game shows

4 - Helloo Trias... a few points here; This takes a straightforward approach. Yet, there is a flawed sentence in between. (1)...

Writing FeedbackTriaseddies - May 19, 2015
'Continuation of family legacy' - AUC, American University Of Cairo

2 - Hi, islamtorky. I like the upbeat vibe I get from your essay - it'll put a smile on the admission...

UndergraduateislamtorkyChristineB - May 19, 2015
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