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Influence of social media in medicine - college supplement

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Working in a real industry gives me experience I need. Study plan for transfer application process.

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Responsibilities of educational institutions in regard to their students. Preparing to GRE

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Do you agree or disagree that advertising serves no purpose for the society and should be banned?

4 - Advertising is a means of marketing strategy. That's my point of view.

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I'm 46, graduated 5 years ago taking the Cbest writing for the 2nd time, This is a practice essay

NEW - The standard The writer clearly presents a central idea and/or point of view and maintains focus on that topic; the...

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Educational and Career Goals: Why I want to be a mechanical engineer

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My Life Along The Railroad

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UndergraduateBrookyrailfanAubreythefruit - Yesterday
United States Naval Academy Personal Statement - how to start?

2 - 1) Why are you interested in the Navy? Was your family in the Navy? Do you like the Navy more than...

EssayscristinariveraAubreythefruit - Yesterday
Not everyone is aware of the importance of anesthesiology. AA-PA personal statement narrative

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Graduateabp2011abp2011 - Yesterday
An example of my leadership TTU scholarship

2 - 1st paragraph: I think you should be more specific when you begin your essay. Here is a suggestion: "Throughout high school,...

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SAT Essay: good decisions vs. bad decisions

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Does the course at school prepare you for work in the future?

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UndergraduateTwinklegreenlcturn87 - Yesterday
Is better to travel in their own country than in foreign countries

2 - "Most of people love traveling to other countries and even within their own country, and it. Travelling is really important in...

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Challenges of a turban / Tomato Head - background, talent essay

4 - - ...discrimination because of my different looks. - Being different forces me to confront who I really am... - So...

Undergraduatejasrajsingh1justivy03 - Yesterday
Harvard Supplement: Role of Medicine in my Life

4 - - Honestly, I retained alittle. - But myMy ( this sentence should start good and "but" is not the right...

Undergraduatesoniap55justivy03 - Yesterday
SOP for MS in MIS with IT Background - 1.7 years of work experience in Infosys Limited

4 - - So after a successful career in theIT Industry I.. - Very soon Not long enough,I got a job as Systems...

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Peace Corps essay - Reasons for joining - I dream of making a small change

4 - - Peace Corps corresponded to all my idealsaspirations. - BeingLiving in a foreign country, helping people... - The idea was...

Undergraduatemadme87justivy03 - Yesterday
Universe exploration projects - these are a waste of money and all the funds should be spent better

2 - Your writing is well done, but needs some help! secondly,, funds... You should call this a new...

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Why a company which build a large factory near my community gets my support? TOEFL essay

3 - I suggest checking the spellings, since some errors as for the issues are here and there. Also, the intro needs a...

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Choosing Economics as a course of study was a simple choice. Suggestions, additions and subtractions

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GraduateZaynZayn - Yesterday
Air Force Academy entry essay - serving my country

3 - - ....things will work out in the end. - Not everyone is called to serve in the Armed ForceServices,...

Undergraduategrayson01justivy03 - Yesterday
GRE essay. Art is not meaningless and the governments should support it

2 - For long time,→ For a long time, I claim that, the government's support... → I claim that the government's support... financial...

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Hard work keeps us determined towards our destiny, the luck alone is not enough to succeed.

2 - in your second paragraph, "determined" doesn't feel like the right word. " It prevents us from being an aimlessness"...

Writing FeedbackmakrAubreythefruit - Aug 26, 2015
[Toefl] extended family continue importance

2 - Besides that, today face-to-face meeting was is affordable because airplane trips were are cheaper.

Writing Feedbacktakeriskmakr - Aug 26, 2015
SAT Essay: Are people defined by their occupations?

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Writing Feedbackszhang25lcturn87 - Aug 26, 2015
Successful people are willing to examine new things and take risks - they can't accept routine

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Writing Feedbackmsalehlcturn87 - Aug 26, 2015
[TOEFL] Internet provides a lot of information and it is positive

4 - Your 1st reason says internet make search easier and cheaper. But you didnt explain how cheaper?

Writing Feedbackjoao_carlosmakr - Aug 26, 2015
IELTS TASK 2 : The problem of over using internet

3 - This essay presents an interesting concept of freedom which should be followed by all young people. You may also want to...

Writing Feedbackgo0905Rich Monte - Aug 26, 2015
Toefl Essays; Students can get some specific jobs only if they study science and mathematics

2 - more important for several reasons One of the most important reasons is that In my opinion/...

Writing Feedbackmakrjoao_carlos - Aug 26, 2015
Bike or not? 'I just learned to ride' common app essay - may it bring a wrong impression of me?

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