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NEW - i am a freshman applying to texas a&m university qatar in their mechanical program. right now i am enrolled in environmental engineering...
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6 - For what you've added for the third essay, I would describe your duties at the nursing home, and why you ultimately chose...
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4 - Thanks for your feedback, it is really helpful. Will keep these points in mind for the next one. I am preparing for...
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2 - An important person who has influenced me life in most positive way is my mother. FromSINCE I was born... furthermore,...
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|Motivation Letter for CEMS-Master of International Management in University of Economics, Prague
4 - Thanks u so much for ur feedback! Most of facts/motivations listed there are too objective; I need to think about what's...
Lettersderek1993derek1993 - 05:47am
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2 - Maruf, in your essay, you provided a thesis statement that indicated your intention of improving the transportation system of the country. Now,...
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|As a passionate for great constructions, geotechnics sparkles in my eyes - SOP Birmingham University
10 - Thank you very much, Louisa :) You're very kind. Fingers crossed!...
Graduateasas4measas4me - 04:02am
|How do I write a patent claim for this?
NEW - For example , A device will send a signal to the main control room when there is a lack of item in...
|Personal essay---In the journey of life, time writes so many stories, so many characters emerge,
15 - In an academic essays , try not to use words like doesn't . Instead write it as does not. Making money...
UndergraduateSubhasislimdavid - 01:23am
|"The Real World" - Essay - agree or disagree whether parents are the best teachers or not
5 - Some minor editing from me
The first teacher we have in our lives in most cases are our parents. They teach...
Writing FeedbackRachelGlimdavid - 01:19am
|What you would like to be for one day / Why Franklin & Marshall? F&M Supplements
7 - Calvin, I have 117 words developed here. I'll be posting if it for your consideration. Use it as an example of how...
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|Media pay excessive concern to the celebrities' lives like actors, singers, or footballers
NEW - The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers, or footballers. They should spend...
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|Explain unique aspects of your academic background or valued experiences you may have had
2 - Hi, Elizabeth! After reading your essay, I believe you must be an outstanding student in your school. According to your passage,...
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|International Relations - Letter of Self-Introduction for KGSP - Master's scholarship
NEW - I'm writing a letter of self-introducction for the Korean Government Scholarship and I'm having so much trouble with it. I've never had...
|Three magical wishes: free Palestine, owning a horse, visiting Venice in Italy
NEW - Each person in this world has his own cute wishes ,but I am one of those who have a great fabulous wishes...
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|An experience that taught you about yourself or the world... UBC Personal Profile (Computer Science)
3 - Hi Kingsley! Welcome to EF! Definitely agreeing with Louisa once again. This essay isn't really centered around the prompt- your overall...
UndergraduateNad720Hiddengrace - Feb 12, 2016
|Personal Statement for LLM graduate to get a JD degree. Aiming at BU and BC.
2 - You have expressed your thoughts beautifully, and very expressively. Wish I could do the same. Anyway, here are my answers:
GraduateScarlettwuRachelG - Feb 12, 2016
|Taiwan and the hidden talents. SoP- Applying for master program - Arts management, administration.
5 - Louisa,
What you said is very pertinent, I just need someone like you, standing away to see how the mess I was...
Undergraduateeric41061eric41061 - Feb 12, 2016
|I have graduated a Bachelor of Science in geology - INTERNATIONAL MASTER'S SCHOLARSHIP application
9 - Christopher, please refrain from using exclamation points in your essay. That is considered impolite in the academic world and shows a lack...
ScholarshipChristopherSvangiespen - Feb 12, 2016
|Essay about Active Kids, Better Students
2 - Well, I major in Political Science, so I may not have a good command of your professional area. However, in order to...
Research PapersCEL623Crystal812 - Feb 12, 2016
|Leadership, progress, and service during the past three years. Georgia Tech admission essay.
4 - Juan, when you are asked to represent 3 character traits in an essay, never, ever, make the mistake of presenting 3 separate...
UndergraduateJuanSebastianRvangiespen - Feb 12, 2016
|How to write a short structured, autobiography - AppState Hayes Music School Essay
3 - Rebecca, you failed to mention where you come from in the first paragraph. That was the first required information in that paragraph...
Undergraduatemynormalfacevangiespen - Feb 12, 2016
|At what age should kids begin their formal education: at four years old or 7 years old instead?
2 - Your passage is almost perfect. Could you pay attention to some details? It is true that education is one of...
Writing FeedbackMardy17Crystal812 - Feb 12, 2016
|MS of Accounting/ Career path essay/Legal background
2 - Yongyi, there is nothing correct about the essay that you wrote. It does not reflect the response that the prompt requires. You...
GraduateScarlettwuvangiespen - Feb 12, 2016
|One brush at a time. KGSP Introductory letter.
5 - Hello Again. It has been almost two days since i startet to re-think the main idea of my essay... I guess i...
Scholarshipjoshuagarcia91joshuagarcia91 - Feb 12, 2016