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People are living longer due to medical care - is it a positive trend?

4 - You have a good writing style however as Louisa said you have to pay attention to your word choice. their quality...

Writing Feedbackmita23NourNour - 03:34pm
The Level of Three Predominant Exports in Southland

5 - and THEY ARE is measured in the billions of pounds. it can be obviously seen that THE international tourism sector...

Writing FeedbackMardy17NourNour - 03:15pm
The impact of advances in technology on office workers productivity- TOEFL integrated essay

5 - It is okey Louise :) I find all the feedbacks in this forum beneficial especially yours. I understand that uploading audio files...

Writing FeedbackNourNourNourNour - 02:50pm
Division of schools in the United States. TOEFL integrated essay

NEW - Hey, I am waiting for your comments even though I am not satisfied with this essay :( :) Summarize...

Writing FeedbackNourNour -
The number of citizens who get ill from consuming unhealthy diet is increasing in some countries

3 - Hi RISKACHA03! I agree with VANGIESPEN's feedback on your essay. It does sound a bit repititive. I took the time...

Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03JuanSebastianR - 11:57am
Arts management field, Letter of recommendation; Master Program. Light, sound control, house manager

2 - Hi Chi-wei.I think you have a good start here, but there are definitely a lot of awkwardly written phrases in here. Also,...

Letterseric41061Hiddengrace - 11:03am
In many countries, the life expectancy is used as indicators to monitor the health of population

5 - Andri, it will be in your best interest to revise the whole essay that you have written. A number of reasons exist...

Writing Feedbackdcho23vangiespen - 09:52am
Good health is one of the crucial life components. Pros and cons of the medical care improvement.

2 - Anita, when you say "living increase and life expectancy", you actually mean the same thing, which is a longer life. Therefore, you...

Writing Feedbackanita11vangiespen - 09:39am
Developing of medical system in many sides keep people healthier and their life expectancy is higher

3 - Adie, I agree with Carol, when you develop the essay, make sure to use a short outline to help you develop your...

Writing FeedbackADIE08vangiespen - 09:17am
I have graduated a Bachelor of Science in geology - INTERNATIONAL MASTER'S SCHOLARSHIP application

6 - Then discuss that aspect. Explain why you need the scholarship aside from how the scholarship can help you. You mentioned in the...

ScholarshipChristopherSvangiespen - 08:51am
Application for Master of Design program - Illinois Institute of Technology

3 - Thank you for the advice Louisa and they are very helpful. I'm working on the revision and will share it with you...

Graduatesoapnooodlesoapnooodle - 07:04am
Personal essay---In the journey of life, time writes so many stories, so many characters emerge,

8 - Yes, we are in agreement on that tone? Make the essay sound more mature and insightful. Any other explanation you...

UndergraduateSubhasisSubhasis - 06:24am
The proportion of monthly temperatures and the averages number of hours of sunshine per year

2 - ... that in AT the beginning and... temperatures has HAD THE same pattern in which Sydney has HAD ...

Writing Feedbackputri22vangiespen - 04:12am
New York - lowest temperatures monthly, but longest hours of sunshine comparing to London and others

3 - Thanks for your suggestions....

Writing Feedbackmita23mita23 - 04:04am
Agree or disagree: Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.

9 - Hi Menglu, i think you did well. but there are some correction from me, i hope it can help you I...

Writing FeedbackCrystal812putri22 - 04:02am
'scene on a TV'. University of Florida - I'm super nervous for my status let me know what you think!

4 - I grew up in humble beginnings to beginnings in a family of seven. Yet at the same time, (with coma)...

UndergraduateGabADIE08 - 03:48am
Aetas people. Transfer Essay Common App Prompt: provide a statement that addresses your reasons..."

3 - ... in order to reach a new understanding of world of the world, and of myself. This is why I want...

UndergraduatedaisyladADIE08 - 03:44am
Over the 50-year period, the women role has transformed in several countries.

4 - Hallo wahyutri, i think; it is better for your conclusion to follow the pattern, like writing the closing which is the paraphrase...

Writing Feedbackwahyutri13anita11 - 03:30am
IELTS TASK 2 - People live longer due to the improving of medical care

4 - If the population in the world have a long life, without conjunction, there are two verb, have and can create it can...

Writing Feedbackputri22dcho23 - 03:24am
Perceived and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime, indicated in varied-variables

3 - ... perceived 2010/11; and actual 2010/11, are rangked as the followers ... ... noticeable account in which the actual 2010/11 was the...

Writing Feedbacksholihin84mita23 - 03:17am
TASk 2: Computer can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations

4 - I believe that focus on learning basic mathematics is very important to children because they will ... i think that it will...

Writing Feedbackswara86mita23 - 03:08am
There are several reasons why criminal activities always happen in many parts of the world.

3 - For instance, more than a third of Indonesian population and more than 47 million Americans living in poverty. where is the main...

Writing Feedbackamrillahmk31mita23 - 02:59am
'LaGuardia was the most popular' - TASK 1: The number of travelers using airports in New York city

5 - Hello, Although your essay has great facts, it would be easier for the reader if you had a clearer starting point....

Writing Feedbackaflah15daisylad - 02:09am
Modern communication gives great tools to connect people but it's less personal than direct relation

4 - Dear Wahyu, I appreciate your fruitful advice. Certainly, I regret the example of advantages is weak although some sentences in the...

Writing FeedbackOSMOSM - Yesterday
TAMU Statement of Purpose Essay, Biochemisty Major. Not sure if prompt is answered correctly.

8 - Sorry, that is against the forum regulations. You will just have to post the essay here again for editing. This is an...

UndergraduateMansif13vangiespen - Yesterday
It's no longer a dream today. SPACE EXPLORATION WITH NATIONAL PRIDE RATHER THAN INTERNATIONAL EFFORT

3 - Tau, from reading your essay, I can see that you wrote it after having read the other essays here at the forum....

Writing Feedbackpikulvangiespen - Yesterday
Greatest learning outcome and impact of the experience

4 - Thank you @vangiespen I rewrote my essay after reinterpreting the prompt. In my new essay, I shifted the focus of my essay...

Writing Feedbacksgsg9sgsg9 - Yesterday
Obedience, an undesirable, yet unavoidable human feature?

3 - Thank you very much for you feedback. It shall b taken seriously. I will surely readjust the introduction and the conclusion and...

Writing Feedbackyahyasafe7yahyasafe7 - Yesterday
'a bunch of people who felt danger' - The Percentage of Crime in 2009 to 2011

2 - Fariz, most of the essay formatting is correct and acceptable. However, you failed to follow the correct essay format for your conclusion...

Writing Feedbackfariz10vangiespen - Yesterday
'there is still discrimination against women' - how this problem evaluated to the present days?

2 - Fariz, this is a grammatically error filled essay. However, it works in terms of the discussion presented. Once the reviewer manages to...

Writing Feedbackfariz10vangiespen - Yesterday
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