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hey guys I am done with my essay for FIT so plz check it

NEW - What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT? Why are you interested in the major you are applying to?...

Essaysparsonsss -
IELTS : Traffic congestion

2 - I see many problems: spelling, plural noun, and a subject-verb agreement. Therefore, I have tried some editing: Another viable...

Writing FeedbackPyon9xeddies - 10:08am
IELTS: Reading books develops more imagination and language skills than watching TV. Do you agree?

NEW - With the development of technology, watching television brings to than reading books. However, books has got their attention that some people...

Writing Feedbacktimexironman -
IELTS: some people think the government should spend more money on science than art. Do you agree ?

4 - This is actually an example. You should have examples contained in the introduction. Introduction is meant for introducing your topic....

Writing Feedbacksky1997dumi - 08:21am
TOEFL: A/D? In modern times, parents will learn more from their children

6 - Combine both these sentence and write one clear statement; In my point of view, I disagree that parents learn more...

Writing FeedbackAichendumi - 08:18am
IELTS: Living away from parents provide youngsters opportunity to meet variety of new people

7 - In recent years, Major major cities have seen unprecedented growth (of what? you need to specify! ) and have become...

Writing Feedbackmvettridumi - 08:14am
My family environment and it's affect on me. They have helped me to become who I am

3 - My family environment played a very big role in shaping me into the person who I am today. You...

UndergraduateZuneradumi - 08:11am
TOEFL: to be an expert in one field is not better than to have broad knowledge of many subjects

3 - As we know, people now face more and more competitions competition than before . If people want to win in these...

Writing FeedbackDearbhailSdumi - 08:08am
Toefl :One should never judge a person by external appearance. Do you agree or disagree ?

NEW - Hi, I need to find my errors in this essay.please help to find them. thank you in advance....

Essayshamedmas -
IELTS: The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items

4 - The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items in US from in 1966 to and 1996. You...

Writing Feedbackdigitalideadumi - 07:55am
IELTS - dramatic increase in the number of Japanese people travelling abroad - Bar chart, Line Graph

2 - This does not have adequate reference to the Japanese tourists to Australia .......... I know that is what you tried...

Writing Feedbackviolethoangdumi - 07:48am
TOEFL_inventors and science pioneers always try new things and take risks

1 - Throughout history, there have been many inventions and breakthroughs have invented made by brave persons. Well.......... your sentences...

Writing Feedbackmasih65dumi - 07:40am
Toefl: It should be mandatory for every company to substitute their old equipment with new ones.

4 - In the late 20th century, our wrong activities have ruined the environments Due to these incorrect manners (I prefer this...

Writing Feedbackhamedmaseddies - 07:10am
GRE Issue Topic

NEW - Q. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and...

UndergraduateNinad09 -
IELTS: Regulation regarding advertisements' unnecessary impact on people's lives

5 - to me your essay's structure is good, main points are developed very well as well as there're many good examples. it...

Writing FeedbackamalxavierPyon9x - 05:24am
scholarship request in manufacturing engineering - motivation letter draft

2 - i understand, but must i use some information from my CV in the motivation letter? or sending it with the letter...

ScholarshipAyman HussienAyman Hussien - 03:52am
"Do what makes you happy" - this is best piece of advice I have ever received

3 - Hi. Alas, English is not my first language, so I will try to comment from the position of pure logic. EF_Kevin...

Undergraduate2015seniorironhand - 02:30am
Parents teach their children the most important and necessary things; they are the best teachers.

5 - His/her life begins with the first teachers, who are parents A child's life begins with his or her's first teachers...

Writing Feedbacknasrullahjwajwa - 01:21am
Learn variety of cultures, traditions by engaging with local people and visiting historical places

NEW - When visiting foreign countries, visitors should take full advantage of learning the culture and traditions of that country. How can they...
TOEFL: Some students live in their hometowns, but others in different cities - which do you like?

4 - Well, you can include the full prompt in the post on top of your essay. Many other do that and...

Writing Feedbackkathytdumi - 12:41am
More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes.

10 - The main reason of this is that wearing the fashionable garments can capture the attention of the general public,and thus people...

Writing Feedbacksundin928dumi - 12:25am
"PERSPECTIVE" - gazing vacantly into the distance. Place where are you perfectly content.

1 - ...... well, I get confused with the latter part of this sentence. Who expected your to be closer to God? There...

Undergraduatenassimahmadidumi - 12:20am
IELTS : higher education or workplace?

5 - thank you a lots Dumi, fikri, mvettri, JethroJosh i'll check my essay right away

Writing FeedbackPyon9xPyon9x - Yesterday
Experience plays an important role in our lives and teach us valuable lessons which help us succeed

5 - Get rid of the entire first paragraph " personally, I agree..." You don't have to tell the readers this, show...

Writing Feedbacksaakshijwajwa - Yesterday
'The principle of success by William Clement' - Personal statement

NEW - Please,i need your constructive criticism on my Personal Statement bellow: The principle of success by William clement which says; 'what mind...

Essaysozigi24434 -
Well-known people who do not go away from the converses of people should be always very affluent

3 - Well, it is better if you align your arguments more with the prompt. Your prompt is focused on earnings of...

Writing Feedbackvery_soondumi - Yesterday
Merging both medicine and business; doctor - person you dream of becoming - Syracuse Supp

3 - I dream of being a person that helps to shape the future of health care by merging both medicine and business....

UndergraduateSteezed12dumi - Yesterday
'The New Teacher' (the struggle of having an uncommon name) - Common App

NEW - (I mostly need help with the ending. I think it still ends a little as a downer and I'm trying to...

Undergraduatejwajwa -
The military taught to be a leader. Nursing school has given me knowledge...Personal Statement DNP

1 - I learned in a valuable... --- I think the work 'in' is left in this sentence accidentally. My ultimate...

GraduateTonio0123EF_Kevin - Yesterday
"just do not panic, go and take what you deserved" - MIT: most significant challenge you've faced.

3 - Don't get me wrong, like I said it's very well-written. But the prompt says "most significant". I'm just saying you should...

UndergraduateironhandSteezed12 - Yesterday
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