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University application essay - My contributions to LEO Club

NEW - ///The title is : Describe the highlights of your most important achievements or contributions. These can also include your work experiences....

Undergraduatepoopyjohnny -
How to weigh the cost and benefits of reloading your own ammunition

NEW - How to weigh the cost and benefits of reloading your own ammunition Reloading ammo is a meticulous and complex process....

Research PapersGarret480 -
Career and life goals - architect's dream

NEW - Since I was a kid, I dreamed of being an architect, buildings, highways caught my attention. As I passed them by,...

Undergraduatejdlr96 -
UC Prompt #1 A single mother in my world - the world you come from

3 - "It is true, I am the product of an absent father, but my mother filled in both shoes of being both...

Undergraduatetylersealsjdlr96 - 07:10pm
Our first computer program, “Hello world”; Essay for English class

3 - how clicking a certain space in on the screen would make the character move. This would give...

Undergraduatecal23jdlr96 - 07:06pm
Growth of Resilience - UC Personal Statement 2

4 - Sdelicana, you provide excellent details about your challenges growing up, but I think paragraphs 2, 3, and 4 could be combined...

Undergraduatesdelicanadquinlan11 - 06:26pm
New discoveries benefits - for instance students can extend their knowledge from the internet

3 - In the past 100 years there are have been many useful discoveries (I think you ought to use the word...

Writing FeedbackRinzodquinlan11 - 06:00pm
IELTS Writing Task 1: Online Sales for retail sectors in New Zealand

3 - The(two) pie charts(below) compare the proportion of online shopping sales for retail sectors between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand. It...

Writing FeedbacksomasalimsEF_Jasmine - 05:57pm
Knowledge from teachers, not from internet or TV? IELTS essay - Learning Resources

4 - I think you conclusion paragraph could use some revision. From your last sentence, it looks like the goal of education is...

Writing Feedbackreplikatikadquinlan11 - 05:49pm
IELTS Writing Task 1: Southland main export in 2000, 2015, and 2025

2 - First paragraph is a little choppy with the "billion pounds sterling" sentence. Try incorporating it with the first sentence like, "The...

Writing Feedbacksomasalimsdquinlan11 - 05:29pm
Brown University carries my top choice of major: Development Studies.

9 - Thank you! That's awesome! I wish I knew someone who went there so I could ask about their personal experience!

Undergraduatezasif326zasif326 - 04:50pm
South Asian cultures typically emphasize that the only career choice for students is in medicine.

4 - Thank you to both EF_season and EF_Jasmine for taking the time to edit my personal statements! I really appreciate all your...

Undergraduatezasif326zasif326 - 04:47pm
We all care what the "world" thinks of us, and deny that - I have gone through this phase.

3 - There are quite a few grammatical and stylistic errors in your essay that I advise you to re-check, though lightfox has...

Undergraduateamassoaikoashiya - 04:03pm
Senioritis - a term used to describe the lack of motivation displayed by students

4 - Thanks Carol, that's exactly what I was thinking - I just wanted to see if it would work or not! I'll...

Undergraduateaikoashiyaaikoashiya - 03:32pm
Trash bins at every nook and corner, more public toilets and regularly cleaned garbage piles

3 - I come from Chennai, India. It is one of the four major metros in the country. Recently, according to a BBC...

Writing Feedbackvidhyamoulilynzee22 - 02:42pm
Bad news in the media? Just to make money and to gain popularity.

3 - Something that I noticed right away is that you will want to use clearly organized paragraphs. I will help you to...

Writing FeedbackBALAJISKLbernal11 - 02:09pm
Father from India - Evaluate personal statement for scholarship

3 - EF_Jasmine- Your suggestion to link key paragraphs was spot on.Shall work on it. Thank you for taking the time to...

Scholarshipconfusee123confusee123 - 01:58pm
World's population has peaked at a geometric rate in this day and age. IELTS WRITING TASK II

5 - You can mention some statistical data like- India population is going to increase by 40% by 2050 and the world population...

Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakkividhyamouli - 11:18am
IELTS Writing Task 2: Security Cameras and Cellphone Tracking

3 - Technological experts have paid more attention to the development of monitoring tolls such as cameras and cellphone tracking in order to...

Writing FeedbacksomasalimsLbernal11 - 09:59am
Write a story based on: "U have let me down for the last time" - he roared

2 - Perhaps you are familiar, with the series "The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe", ? In this series, the Lion...

EssayshunhannEF_Carol - 08:12am
Enthusiasm and dedication is the key to any success. Master of Science In Transportation SOP

2 - Enthusiasm and dedication is the key to any success.Internal desire to achieve something drives someone to success succeed overcoming difficulties in...

GraduateEUPHORIAsomasalims - 06:43am
Event to reduce a tension between ASEAN students, which promoted tolerance and reconciliation

3 - thank you very much for your suggestion, however, I hope you can give me an example and underline my sentence...

Writing Feedbackfadlanmuzakkifadlanmuzakki - 03:36am
People who committed crime, especially the young offenders, have the right to be educated

3 - Hi duomaxwel, I have some general suggestions for you, I hope it can help you to improve your writing....

Writing Feedbackduomaxwelfadlanmuzakki - 03:25am
IELTS TASK 2: One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer

4 - Good health is a key for happy life. For this reason, the majority of people these days are estimated to live...

Writing FeedbackAnfaliaSHanafi - 02:32am
The cool night breeze whistled softly, blowing lightly through my hair

3 - I will say it was quite intriguing to read I thoroughly enjoyed it. I see great potential in this beginning....

Writing Feedbackmaddy1579audley - Yesterday
Ageing population worldwide in 2000 and predictions for 2050. IELTS-1

3 - "Overall, the number of elderly people is expected to grow in all parts of the world, with the world total's index...

Writing Feedbackautumn_waltzaudley - Yesterday
Car ownership, public transport and environment protection - Ielts2

2 - Hello, Here are some edits for what you have. A good point to make is that, not only does...

Writing Feedbackautumn_waltzlynzee22 - Yesterday
Nella Larsen's Passing - what to write about?

3 - Here is the begining of my essay.. any thoughts? Women who were raised during the later 19th century were raised...

Research PapersCh3llie09Ch3llie09 - Yesterday
My good academic record and motivation make me a strong recommendation for a place at this program.

2 - Hello, This essay was well written overall. You had great organization and good enthusiasm. I made some technical...

Letterswasemlynzee22 - Yesterday
Essay on choosing Scotland - as a "good place to be", robotics and university

3 - Hi Lindsay, Thanks a lot.i will do my best here.

Scholarshipnijanthannijanthan - Yesterday
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