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Dwelling into cities can reveal important characteristics of a society that inhabited there

3 - I would like to give you some feedback. I would suggest deleting since the beginning of this world....

Graduatesid052lcturn87 - 08:34pm
Fashion Institute of Technology Essay - Fashion Business Management

3 - I would like to help you with your essay. You are very descriptive in your essay. I would like...

Undergraduateasmith16pomlcturn87 - 08:07pm
Educating children is more difficult today

2 - I can help you with your essay. I will make it simple and only correct the mistakes. 1st paragraph: Delete...

Writing FeedbackConfusionstatiolcturn87 - 04:29pm
Spanish language is my passion. Letter of motivation for internship opportunity

2 - Hello, these are only some suggestions: Dear XXXXX, (Dear and the name of the person should be written when...

LettersMatisse2lcturn87 - 03:54pm
Analyze an Argument Task: Physical Fitness of Corpora's Citizens

2 - I can help you with some of your essay. This essay can be quite difficult. It seems as if they are...

Writing FeedbackTakeiteasylcturn87 - 02:50pm
Poverty poem. Humanity, where is your personality?

2 - I would like to help you with meaning. I enjoy writing poetry, but I think that poetry expresses what you want...

PoetryAbdi hafizlcturn87 - 01:30pm
SAT Essay: Should we trust and accept common sense, or be skeptical of it?

3 - I would like to give you some feedback. You have been practicing for quite some time. Your writing is...

Writing Feedbackszhang25lcturn87 - 12:50pm
No unnecessary experiments on animals! Public should show responsibility. IELTS.

5 - Many thanks for all your comments; much appreciated.

Writing FeedbackChamiJayaChamiJaya - 12:05pm
How does the media coverage on police shootings affect how the people view law enforcement?

NEW - I have never been a great writer. I know I need to improve, any advice? Topic is "How does the...

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'I seek a differentiator degree' - SOP For Masters in Business/Data Analytics Program

2 - @siddar, first of all, it's not quiet good to start your letter with an "If",now I will tackle a few more...

Graduatesiddartharaojustivy03 - 11:26am
Freshman prompt on how my world has formed me - UC application essay.

2 - - ...it is one that boundsbinds me into... - My community castshas ( you've used "casts" in the beginning of...

Undergraduatechiefbitchjustivy03 - 11:08am
What Luther King suggested in his quote? Critical thinking is a central goal of Jesuit education.

3 - - For instance, One of the words is how to... - ForOne example,... - When we speaktalk about English,......

Undergraduatea7lamajro7justivy03 - 10:55am
Help me correct my introduction for my speech class about myself

3 - - As for myIn my family,.... - I have just one Sister... - ....and she is a registered nurse at aMemorial...

Speecheschopstix102justivy03 - 10:23am
Parents do what they saw and learned from their parents

3 - The sentence formation in your essay is very poor. I think you need to read a lot from newspaper, magazines or...

Graduatesukruozaslansid052 - 09:28am
TOEFL IndependentEssay - Tips how should governments encourage energy savings?

2 - To push people into using less energy by simply raising the price is a neither effective nor. I think that you...

Writing Feedbackmashupsid052 - 09:02am
The bar chart shows that males enjoyed more leisure time than females throughout the period shown

2 - Hello, I can help you with your summary of the bar chart. You are doing quite well with your...

Writing Feedbackbillyabbotlcturn87 - 08:29am
Why should children learn a foreign language so early?

4 - This introductory paragraph did not paraphrase the question successfully since you have no clear thesis statement. Remember, it is important...

Writing Feedbacktk0308shintacandrade - 05:13am
The comparison of world inhabitants divided by each continents between 1900 and 2000

2 - Para 1. Please note the changes, only small errors but you have to be careful about it later on. Likewise, notice...

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowoshintacandrade - 02:23am
IELTS TASK 2 - Children are engaged in some kind of paid work

2 - Since the sentences are too long and take to read, I try to write this intro more succinctly Today's...

Writing FeedbackBayuwibowoeddies - 01:50am
IELTS: Building new sports facilities is the best way for public health??

3 - Hello tk0308, maybe you can rewrite your introduction and conclusion. For introduction you can use paraphrase from the sentence...

Writing Feedbacktk0308Bayuwibowo - 12:32am
Violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on society. IELTS

3 - Hi Hung, let me rewrite the introduction In this contemporary era, the media such as television and video game...

Writing FeedbackHungBayuwibowo - 12:19am
IELTS task 1: The population of fishers and exported fish in the world

4 - - In 1970, the highest number of world fishermen was living in Asia witnessed rose significantly, from 9 millions to 24...

Writing FeedbackveaeniaBayuwibowo - Yesterday
A breakdown of the process of water cycle. IELTS Task 1

4 - Hello, let me give the feedback for your improvement. - Please, you can use other sentence conectors such as whilst,...

Writing FeedbackveaeniaBayuwibowo - Yesterday
Teachers are more influent than friends

3 - For introductory paragraph, you better put the thesis statement in the end. Let me give a try: It is hard...

Writing FeedbackBangbangshintacandrade - Yesterday
Foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Advantage outweight disadavantages

2 - I can help your essay. I would like to focus on word choice and meaning: 1st paragraph: The first...

Writing Feedbackdanielwonglcturn87 - Yesterday
Horror Essay continuation of the book : The house on the Brink. Need more ideas.

NEW - Hi All, Thanks for using time to read my essay , I welcome negative comments. I would appreciate on how to...

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Zoo has no useful purpose. Do you agree or disagree?

3 - Hi nil ! I think for these kind of essay topics, you are suppose to pick a side. If...

Writing FeedbacknilSamuelsam123 - Yesterday
Without parents assistance children can easily be affected by bad habits, lifestyle and cultures

8 - This essay is well done. You have an intro conclusion and three body paragraphs. final tests, However... The...

Writing Feedbacknguyenthiet1993EF_Carol - Yesterday
IELTS essay: Age limit for retirement is 50 in some countires and 65 to 70 in others

4 - This is my little tip for IELTS writing. The task2 should be over 250 words. And as repeated words could...

Writing FeedbackBalajiskbtk0308 - Yesterday
IELTS TASK 2 : The problem of over using internet

5 - I recommend you not to use many "WE". I had been thought it from my IELTS teacher since I started to...

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