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'BIGB Lessons' - Who or what inspires you the most and why? Ashoka University

2 - Great essay! You have really good English. I can't really even detect that it's not your first language! My edits are...

Undergraduateheythere11LBM - 09:49am
IELTS; Schools greatest failure is that it focuses too intensely on academic subjects

3 - Dear Sir, I will work on the introduction as suggested by you. I have included the full prompt...

Writing FeedbackSagar1004Sagar1004 - 09:34am
Looking back on your high school years - Essay for Ashoka University

1 - I can definitely relate to this essay! I think this is fine. No big corrections to be made. I made one...

Undergraduateheythere11LBM - 09:25am
TOEFL_The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns. Do you agree?

4 - Well, I think it is a good idea for me to write only 2 body para, at least for now....

Writing FeedbackFor a voyFor a voy - 09:20am
"It's nothing but a cult!" - Essay for Ashoka University. Need to cut at least 150 words!

1 - Wow! This is a great essay. You tell a very compelling story. If I were to cut anything, I would cut...

Undergraduateheythere11LBM - 09:17am
IELTS Writing Task 1: Life cycle of silkworm and production of silk cloth

NEW - The diagram provided shows the lifecycle of silkworm and the figure adjoining it illustrates the production of silk cloth. It...

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IELTS: 'food, drink and tobacco' - statistic of expenditure graph

3 - actually i don't really understand what u mean by 'reporting tone' , could you please give me some examples? any,...

Writing Feedbackxizon7777xizon7777 - 08:49am
'I'm a control freak' - Common App Essay - "environment where you are content..."

2 - Thanks for all your corrections and suggestions!! I'll read over your essays now.

UndergraduateLBMLBM - 08:40am
More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes.

NEW - More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes. Why is it? What are the positive and negative effects...

Writing Feedbacksundin928 -
I have a question about the perspective of a profile essay.

1 - I think you can go with 'My Dad'. Unless the professor has specifically asked you to use third person.

Essaysram012593heythere11 - 06:23am
I believe that society has been helped by the invention of the Internet

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Writing Feedbackpntncarsundin928 - 05:39am
Most people believe that adult should provide all child demands, because they not are independent

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Writing Feedbackhamedmassundin928 - 05:35am
IELTS Air travel is becoming more welcomed by common people since its price is going down

6 - Admittedly, the market price of flight tickets is normally high so that the majority people have to choose cheaper means to...

Writing Feedbacksundin928dumi - 04:11am
Dramatic increase in fast food consuming

3 - What is the purpose of writing this essay? Is it for IELTS, TOEFL? Mention the purpose in the title itself so...

Writing FeedbackHaihadumi - 04:05am
"Another First Date" - my narrative essay

2 - ................ well, the latter part is not so clear to me :( ..... is this what you mean; If...

Writing FeedbackLuna2014dumi - 03:54am
IELTS writing 1: meat and poultry consumption

1 - The line graph compares presents the per capita consumption of different meat items, namely beef, pork, brollers broilers and turkey...

Writing FeedbackStarSeadumi - 03:40am
IELTS: In which areas people made important progress?

5 - Today,the role of English as a global language is indispensable.Some people are of the point view that we can implement introduce...

Writing Feedbacksundin928dumi - 03:31am
Vehicle has enhanced people being. However, cars harm nature.

1 - Nowadays, most of the people live in big cities and every working day they have to get to their job....

Writing FeedbackHappymandumi - 03:19am
SAT - "happiness is not something that happens to us after we get what we want"

3 - Impressive start :) It seems to be something close at hand yet or sometimes far away...

Writing Feedbacklittletingdumi - 03:13am
IELTS - Effect of movies and computer games containing violence

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Writing FeedbackmsarkarStarSea - 02:30am
IELTS: Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable

5 - On the other hand, the development of technology may result in negative consequences on the environment and society.

Writing FeedbackdigitalideaStarSea - 02:07am
What happens in Hardee's: CommonApp Essay

2 - I'm editing from a phone, so hopefully it comes out right! My edits should be in italics. During an afterschool...

Undergraduateswj97LBM - 01:52am
[IELTS] 'Long-term positive effects of culture' - should tourist obey local customs and behaviors?

9 - thank you that's very kind :) Oh I see! Didn't think of "cultural diversity" before eventhough...

Writing FeedbackSalMonSalMon - 12:45am
'The three major artists and designers' - Two short essays for Art center Pasadena

2 - thanks!

UndergraduateAlexturtAlexturt - 12:09am
'Europe had degraded most of its land' - three regions of the world during 1990's

1 - First, you need to upload the charts in to the thread for us to provide you with more meaningful feedbacks. Without...

Writing Feedbackkashafdumi - Yesterday
'We should acknowledge and use most suitable methods of learning' - Books vs Experience?

1 - You need to improve the presentation of this line. This is the opening sentence of your essay and we generally...

Writing Feedbackhirt_01dumi - Yesterday
IELTS: Effects of technology to communication - dangers for a society

9 - Thank you, dumi. I did this without making an outline. Is that the reason why that the body paragraphs are...

Writing Feedbackbmomonganbmomongan - Yesterday
'Stuck on a boat in the middle of the ocean' - Background / Story Central to Identity

NEW - I don't have anyone I can talk to who can help me with my paper for applying to colleges. Any idea...

Undergraduatelancelot12 -
In order to avoid social crisis we should treat the elders with a courteous attitude

4 - hi guys ,your comments are really helpful to me,and i rewrite this essay. Welcome to modify :) There is...

Writing Feedbacksundin928sundin928 - Yesterday
IELTS Easy for poor people to get access to university education

5 - thanks dumi.

Writing Feedbacksundin928sundin928 - Yesterday
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