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One brush at a time. KGSP Introductory letter.

4 - Well, I think a personal experience can be great if you can connect it to the reason behind going into your chosen...

Scholarshipjoshuagarcia91Hiddengrace - 11:10am
IELTS Task 2 - Gap Year, Advantages and Disadvantages

NEW - Hi, dear fellows from Essay Forum, I have just figured out this website and, as I am studying for the IELTS,...

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GeorgiaTech Transfer Essays (Civil Engineering)

2 - Hi there Waqas. On the first essay, I don't think you have enough there that actually answers the prompt. You touch on...

UndergraduatewaqametuHiddengrace - 10:00am
One of the benefits of growing up in a developing country was that I got to see my city be built.

5 - Made some changes. how can i improve it further. thanks Growing up watching documentaries like "An Inconvenient Truth", I wanted to...

Undergraduatewaqametuwaqametu - 06:51am
SOP for Master's program in Earth Science Engineering, on Hungarian Government Scholarship.

NEW - To observe and learn is fundamental to all humans but the experience is more profound when a person is brought up in...

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I have graduated a Bachelor of Science in geology - INTERNATIONAL MASTER'S SCHOLARSHIP application

7 - Dear Vangiespen and all here is the way i finally canalized my personal statement;Thank you for your help once more ...

ScholarshipChristopherSChristopherS - 01:41am
Division of schools in the United States. TOEFL integrated essay

2 - The write explains the division of schools in the United States. However, the professor explores the disadvantages of this system. First...

Writing FeedbackNourNoursgsg9 - 12:11am
Transfer admission essay for Georgia Tech. I need help forming an excellent essay which I lack of.

6 - Hi VANGIESPEN and everyone else, Your feedback has been very helpful. I revised the essay, and I am now below the...

UndergraduateJuanSebastianRJuanSebastianR - Yesterday
Leadership, progress, and service during the past three years. Georgia Tech admission essay.

NEW - Good evening everyone. I am applying for transfer to Georgia Tech to become an Aerospace Engineer with the ultimate goal of...

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Aetas people. Transfer Essay Common App Prompt: provide a statement that addresses your reasons..."

4 - Hi Daisy! I think you have a good start here. I'm not going to give you grammar, wording and punctuation edits but...

UndergraduatedaisyladHiddengrace - Yesterday
Arts management field, Letter of recommendation; Master Program. Light, sound control, house manager

3 - For my supreme appreciation, I really learned a lot from your earnest help, I would rewrite it as soon as possible,...

Letterseric41061eric41061 - Yesterday
Animal-assisted therapy is beneficial. TOEFL integrated essay

NEW - Summarize the main points of the reading passage and explain how they are supported by the information presented in the lecture. ...

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People are living longer due to medical care - is it a positive trend?

4 - You have a good writing style however as Louisa said you have to pay attention to your word choice. their quality...

Writing Feedbackmita23NourNour - Yesterday
The Level of Three Predominant Exports in Southland

5 - and THEY ARE is measured in the billions of pounds. it can be obviously seen that THE international tourism sector...

Writing FeedbackMardy17NourNour - Yesterday
The impact of advances in technology on office workers productivity- TOEFL integrated essay

5 - It is okey Louise :) I find all the feedbacks in this forum beneficial especially yours. I understand that uploading audio files...

Writing FeedbackNourNourNourNour - Yesterday
The number of citizens who get ill from consuming unhealthy diet is increasing in some countries

3 - Hi RISKACHA03! I agree with VANGIESPEN's feedback on your essay. It does sound a bit repititive. I took the time...

Writing FeedbackRiiskacha03JuanSebastianR - Yesterday
In many countries, the life expectancy is used as indicators to monitor the health of population

5 - Andri, it will be in your best interest to revise the whole essay that you have written. A number of reasons exist...

Writing Feedbackdcho23vangiespen - Yesterday
Good health is one of the crucial life components. Pros and cons of the medical care improvement.

2 - Anita, when you say "living increase and life expectancy", you actually mean the same thing, which is a longer life. Therefore, you...

Writing Feedbackanita11vangiespen - Yesterday
Developing of medical system in many sides keep people healthier and their life expectancy is higher

3 - Adie, I agree with Carol, when you develop the essay, make sure to use a short outline to help you develop your...

Writing FeedbackADIE08vangiespen - Yesterday
Application for Master of Design program - Illinois Institute of Technology

3 - Thank you for the advice Louisa and they are very helpful. I'm working on the revision and will share it with you...

Graduatesoapnooodlesoapnooodle - Yesterday
Personal essay---In the journey of life, time writes so many stories, so many characters emerge,

8 - Yes, we are in agreement on that tone? Make the essay sound more mature and insightful. Any other explanation you...

UndergraduateSubhasisSubhasis - Yesterday
The proportion of monthly temperatures and the averages number of hours of sunshine per year

2 - ... that in AT the beginning and... temperatures has HAD THE same pattern in which Sydney has HAD ...

Writing Feedbackputri22vangiespen - Yesterday
New York - lowest temperatures monthly, but longest hours of sunshine comparing to London and others

3 - Thanks for your suggestions....

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Agree or disagree: Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.

9 - Hi Menglu, i think you did well. but there are some correction from me, i hope it can help you I...

Writing FeedbackCrystal812putri22 - Yesterday
'scene on a TV'. University of Florida - I'm super nervous for my status let me know what you think!

4 - I grew up in humble beginnings to beginnings in a family of seven. Yet at the same time, (with coma)...

UndergraduateGabADIE08 - Yesterday
Over the 50-year period, the women role has transformed in several countries.

4 - Hallo wahyutri, i think; it is better for your conclusion to follow the pattern, like writing the closing which is the paraphrase...

Writing Feedbackwahyutri13anita11 - Yesterday
IELTS TASK 2 - People live longer due to the improving of medical care

4 - If the population in the world have a long life, without conjunction, there are two verb, have and can create it can...

Writing Feedbackputri22dcho23 - Yesterday
Perceived and actual likelihood of being a victim of crime, indicated in varied-variables

3 - ... perceived 2010/11; and actual 2010/11, are rangked as the followers ... ... noticeable account in which the actual 2010/11 was the...

Writing Feedbacksholihin84mita23 - Yesterday
TASk 2: Computer can easily do all the basic and advanced calculations

4 - I believe that focus on learning basic mathematics is very important to children because they will ... i think that it will...

Writing Feedbackswara86mita23 - Yesterday
There are several reasons why criminal activities always happen in many parts of the world.

3 - For instance, more than a third of Indonesian population and more than 47 million Americans living in poverty. where is the main...

Writing Feedbackamrillahmk31mita23 - Yesterday
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