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Research Paper: Lupus and its Lifestyle (Help me & review this paper please)

4 - Remember that the research paper will run between 8-10 pages, will integrate sources from a diverse array of resources using MLA...

Essaysmjbyrdmjbyrd - 01:03am
Process of making maple syrup... - IELTS WRITING TASK 1

NEW - Maple syrup is prepared from the sugar maple tree. It is a procedure that involves several steps. The sap has to...
"My Life Incubator: Target" - Common App Essay Prompt 4

4 - I will continue with the second prompt. Thank you very much, Vangiespen. Do you have any suggested revisions with...

Undergraduatelantaylor13lantaylor13 - 12:23am
Elon Scholarship Essay

1 - Lauren, this is a very effective essay. You closely adhere to the prompt and explain how Stephen Hawking and your grandmother...

Undergraduatevetementuvangiespen - 12:09am
Meeting James Watson, best day of your life. VTech Supplement

1 - Kumar, have you given any thought to lessening the story about the trip to the event place and instead discussing more...

Undergraduatetoughguyvangiespen - Yesterday
About the situation of the extinct languages - [IELTS task2]:

4 - I know that you try to use comparison language here. However, you failed to present what the prompt is asking...

Writing FeedbackyoshieBeddies - Yesterday
''work is an anti node for poverty'' - My mother a supportive figure

5 - I can understand the overall message and tone of your essay, but as other posters have said: there are a lot...

UndergraduateModewaplantaylor13 - Yesterday
The world I come from : small city / digital world (please help me decide) - MIT

4 - I really like idea two!!! It is more of a direct answer to the prompt as it is "the world you...

Undergraduatemelramadhanivetementu - Yesterday
"The Code is Mightier Than The Pen" - NYU Supplementary Essay

7 - I feel like you should be more specific as to what NYU can offer you. I think you did really well...

Undergraduatelantaylor13vetementu - Yesterday
"You're a 7th grader now. You need to be responsible for your schoolwork" "Why Brown?" essay

5 - The opening line is awesome. It made me make a second look at what you were talking about and really drew...

Undergraduatedhizzylantaylor13 - Yesterday
"Young antique" - challenge myself; common prompt1 essay

6 - - Field training for what? Be as specific as possible, don't leave the reader guessing since this essay is supposed...

Undergraduatesarahsosvangiespen - Yesterday
COmmon app prompt 1 : Unbalanced

2 - thank you very much for your help

Undergraduatejuicyjuicy - Yesterday
UC App Personal Statement 2 - Creation of a program, and how it developed me.

1 - Wilson, this is definitely an accomplishment that you should be proud of even if it happened at a very young age....

Undergraduatewilhui3977vangiespen - Yesterday
Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to deal with them - IELTS essay

3 - Identifying the part of question to avoid out of topic: Putting criminals into prisons is not an effective way to...

Writing FeedbackYiliang ChentiaDS - Yesterday
"Studying history is important to me because history is all-encompassing" Cornell Essay help

1 - Daniel, while the essay is fine as it is, I believe that adding an anecdote at the start will help explain...

Undergraduatedhizzyvangiespen - Yesterday

7 - Hamed, an SOP specifically states that you talk about the "Purpose" of your application. That discussion is based solely upon your...

GraduateHamed727vangiespen - Yesterday
Crime is an act that violates the norms of criminal law. Ielts Task 2 - Crime Teenagers

3 - Periodic sentence can be used for thesis statement to impress reader interest Let me try to...

Writing FeedbackSatriatiaDS - Yesterday
Advantages and disadvantages of arranged marriages as compared to love marriages

1 - Ahmed, is this paper to be submitted as a response paper, comparison essay, or opinion paper? Can you providing the guiding...

Writing Feedbackahmedraj446vangiespen - Yesterday
My life, for as long as I can remember, has been rather good. I have always had advantages. UC essay

3 - Navin, can you provide me with the UC prompt that you are planning to use this essay for so I can...

Undergraduatenvn7971vangiespen - Yesterday
Eyewitness Identification is Unreliable

1 - There's no research paper visible - reattach it here - paste it.

Research PapersBayHeadOpuntia - Yesterday
I take pride in everything the soccer game has been able to give me - UC Essay

4 - Thanks you guys :)

UndergraduatePlsBrian22PlsBrian22 - Yesterday
Beyond your academic credentials, what else makes you unique and colorful? William and Mary essay

2 - This is a wonderful essay. Really demonstrates your inquisitive spirt through a fun, playful anecdote. I really think your essay is...

Undergraduatevetementudhizzy - Yesterday
Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. Good roommate?

4 - Yes, you help, Modewap, Thanks to you too. .

Writing Feedbackvolkanovolkano - Yesterday
I'll tell you something about me: I am alive... Penn State Personal Statement

1 - Kyra, I have a bit of advice for you. Rather than positioning the essay to show that you are alive, why...

Undergraduatekyrajayvangiespen - Yesterday
People around me always consider me as a bird of a different feather. UC Prompt 1

1 - Alan, what you wrote is a personal statement, not an essay about the world that you come from. While there are...

Undergraduatealan1213vangiespen - Yesterday
Samsae-third generation Korean immigrant-born in Japan - learned of my Korean and Japanese heritage

7 - Here is what you can do in order to highlight your hybrid personality. Leave this particular essay as is for now...

Undergraduatekitakanamevangiespen - Yesterday
Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact

1 - It is certain that the tourism increase job opportunities for locals, which help them to lift up their living standards....

Writing Feedbackd96nguyenDeepamar - Yesterday
It is no doubt that UK education is world leading and internationally excellent. Master degree SOP

NEW - please help me to evaluate structure , comprehensive , grammar and expressions of my statement of purpose! Statement of Purpose...

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Studying here is a distinctive opportunity that many enlightened-mind students dream of

2 - thank you very much for your note I am going to apply in Manchester University do you think...

Undergraduateissamafayadissamafayad - Yesterday
Criminology as my planned major - UC Transfer Personal Statement

2 - Thank you for the feedback, will definitely try and re-structure that last paragraph.

Undergraduateosmoyoosmoyo - Yesterday
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