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No one had taught me how to reach out to others when in need of help - MSU Application Essay

4 - Thank you for the feedback!

UndergraduateMKhanMKhan - 11:00am
Journalism is not an easy career in Vietnam - E.W SCRIPPS SCHOOL OF JOURNALISM/OHIO UNIVERSITY

NEW - Hi everyone. I'm apply to E.W Scripps school of Journalism this fall and this is my PS. Please give me some...

Undergraduateprecious_summer -
"Football is a matter much more important than life and death"; BATES COLLEGE PROMPT

NEW - Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below. "Pass it on the...

UndergraduateBBKayani -

NEW - What music, art, science, mathematics or literature has challenged, surprised, or unsettled you and in what way. Ready to Die...

UndergraduateMizz_thinkable -
Mahatma Gandhi - favourite statue of the person you wanted to make

NEW - If you are asked to make statue or monument. Then which famous personality you wanted to present in the form of...

Graduategautam007 -
I want to excel my skills by studying Master's in Thermal & Fluid Sciences from your institution

1 - Your second last para is that important . You don't need to be so much specific in defining your area. You...

Graduatesanket1011gautam007 - 08:00am
You are not here fundamentally for the purpose of completing degree requirements - Why Penn College?

1 - Very straight forward, poised tone. I like how you try to tackle the prompt with maturity and trajectory. So let's get...

Undergraduatesampunk9494leiya0920 - 07:49am
Transporting food by air now provides market opportunities both exporting and importing countries.

1 - Your second point is not relevent. As demerit you are linking it with global warming but there should be some other...

Writing Feedbackruwchiigautam007 - 07:37am
Business Vs House - what to buy? Give necessary reason and example

2 - thanks for valuable comment

Writing Feedbackgautam007gautam007 - 07:29am
Future Jumbo / "Let your life speak" / What makes you happy? - Tufts Supplement Essays

4 - This is the edited version: The Jumbo magazine was unveiled to me under the quivering LED lighting of the guidance...

Undergraduateleiya0920leiya0920 - 07:22am
An odd group of friends- Brown University Supplement Essay

NEW - We all exist within communities or groups of various sizes, origins, and purposes; pick one and tell us why it is...

Undergraduateleiya0920 -
One particular incident changed me from being self-centered to being sensitive to others.

9 - Dear Vangiespen, Sorry I have taken so long to reply - was not well. thank you so much for your feedback....

UndergraduateRhea97Rhea97 - 07:19am
INVITATION - we have arranged a meeting - a google hang out.

2 - well, why do you need those? but, It's in a community. we are something like project managers and we are trying...

Lettersheavenplayheavenplay - 06:42am
[IELTS] Writing Task 1 - The Unemployment Rate in 2 Advanced Countries

1 - I think you meant that Japan overtook US in the umployment rate here.

Writing Feedbackruwchiisampunk9494 - 03:03am
IELTS: The pattern of studying plays a major crucial aspect in the academic achievements

6 - [Link / Image / Video / Quote]

Writing FeedbackAnfaliasampunk9494 - 02:39am
Project proposal for M A in Fine Arts

NEW - Project Proposal:- Hello every one I wrote my project proposal to have admission in university to complete my Master degree and...

GraduateAbdulrehman -
A blistering mallet increases its velocity and with it, its trepidation

4 - Thanks a lot once again! Here is the revised version: A blistering...

GraduateJesusLM2JesusLM2 - 12:59am
Contributing to Macalester community, personally and academically

4 - Your wish is my command :-) With regards to the academic aspect of your personality, try not to concentrate...

Undergraduatesampunk9494vangiespen - 12:33am
Why I Choose Georgia Tech to study chemical Engineering essay

3 - - When writing a character sensitive essay, try to omit flowery words and introductions. State your case immediately and utilize...

Graduatemyngoc311vangiespen - Yesterday
Cultural shock in Dubai; teach myself a new skill or concept

4 - Hi Cheung, well, I already offered you some guide questions in my previous response that should help you better develop the...

Undergraduatenicolezmh1997vangiespen - Yesterday
NYU. A reality come true or just a dream school?- Help on my NYU supplement

3 - Harrison, the best way to approach this essay will be to engage the admissions officer in a discussion about how the...

Undergraduatespyr0xsvangiespen - Yesterday
My dad, my hero. I am thankful to him - my life is better from the one I had back in Peru

1 - Hi Maria, can you do me a favor and provide me with the essay prompt for your work? I can't...

Undergraduatemaria96vangiespen - Yesterday
Stanford Short Answers: So they can get to know me better.

4 - Martin, I believe that you should maximize the use of the word count in your response to every question. 50 words...

Undergraduatemartin16vangiespen - Yesterday
"It's rare for someone so young to contract shingles, but it's still possible" - I stuck in there...

3 - The shingles story is not developing well in my opinion. I also feel that it is not strong enough a prompt...

UndergraduateFullofSeoulvangiespen - Yesterday
"Allowing you to travel on your own is the last sliver of the cake of childhood"; Failed trip to NYC

2 - No. Absolutely not. Please do not use this essay as your coming of age story. A coming of age story must...

Undergraduatesage28vangiespen - Yesterday
Why and what motivates you to volunteer for Bina Antarbudaya? > volunteer exchange scholarship

2 - Your motivation and reasons for joining this volunteer activity is very shallow. You need to show a personal connection or cause...

Scholarshipmardiansyahvangiespen - Yesterday
A time when I had to tutor a teenager of different background

2 - Thanks for the feedback. If I make the change it will be "... challenges of me such as tuition" which...

Undergraduatesampunk9494sampunk9494 - Yesterday
Extra-curricular activity of being a listener and petition writer - inspirational life experience

1 - This essay will be vastly improved as an extra curricular activity narrative if you spoke more of how you completed your...

Undergraduatevoocatchervangiespen - Yesterday
Some views and opinion about learning methods for children - IELTS

3 - I guess this paragraph is a one idea paragraph. In my own opinion, you have to develop your paragraph to...

Writing FeedbackPJmustbebetterruwchii - Yesterday
Humility leads people to fulfillment in the most authentic way possible - Transition into Adulthood

6 - Philipe, I happen to know someone who had a Bar mitzvah and I believe that aside from this actual ceremony itself,...

UndergraduateCharphilvangiespen - Yesterday
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