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Self Introduction For UN Young Professional Programme

6 - Dear all of advisers. I try to make a revision. Particularly, the recruiter wants to know the candidate based on experience,...

Writing FeedbackSHanafiSHanafi - 06:46pm
Here, in the movie theater is where I feel the most satisfaction, the most joy, the most comfort

NEW - I need help with my essay I dont know what to do with it. I know its missing something but i...

Undergraduateamberkb -
'The principle of success by William Clement' - Personal statement

1 - Hello friend, I bet the reader will respond well to this essay because you seem so diligent and motivated. I...

Essaysozigi24434EF_Kevin - 03:54pm
Zero and One - The Most Powerful Numbers - Transfer Essay

1 - I like everything about this essay!! The first sentence, about zero and one, definitely will intrigue most readers because it...

Undergraduatefayne4674EF_Kevin - 03:45pm
'The New Teacher' (the struggle of having an uncommon name) - Common App

1 - It is absolutely inspiring to read writing from a fellow person of color with such a strong ascendancy over the english...

Undergraduatejwajwaakdksoulja49 - 02:49pm
I was told that I'm lucky to receive an education in America - USF college entrance essay

1 - First things first, you do not completely answer the prompt as nothing mentioned above addresses the way in which you intend...

Undergraduatehari11296akdksoulja49 - 02:15pm
GRE - Issue task - People should undertake risky action only after they consider its consequences.

1 - Risky action, by definition, is one that has the possibility that people might not achieve what they expect undertaking certain actions....

Writing FeedbackLauren5102vzvz123 - 01:58pm
'how to apply and what to write?' - Self introduction essay for KGSP scholarship

NEW - Hi friends, am going to apply for a scholarship program in Korea. Can anyone give me tips on how to apply...

ScholarshipLeigh -
TOEFL: A/D? In modern times, parents will learn more from their children

7 - This contains bad grammar. Use this pattern: While some people argue that this statement bla bla bla, some others claim...

Writing FeedbackAicheneddies - 12:06pm
IELTS: some people think the government should spend more money on science than art. Do you agree ?

5 - (the) amount of is followed by uncountable noun (the) number of followed by plural noun excellent idea...

Writing Feedbacksky1997eddies - 11:50am
IELTS TASK 2: WOMEN AND MEN EXCLUDED FROM SPECIFIC JOBS ?

NEW - Topic: Woman and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females...

Writing FeedbackShinigami97 -
IELTS: Reading books has more benefits in development of imagination and language skills

1 - "have" for more accurate use of grammar :D

Writing FeedbacktimexironmanShinigami97 - 11:21am
IELTS: public transportation and more flyovers as a solution for traffic congestion

3 - the styke you use in this part is a bit inappropriate for IELTS task 2 which demands more formal style...

Writing FeedbackPyon9xShinigami97 - 11:19am
"Every great dream begins with a dreamer" - my essay for FIT

NEW - What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT? Why are you interested in the major you are applying to?...

Undergraduateparsonsss -
IELTS: Living away from parents provide youngsters opportunity to meet variety of new people

7 - In recent years, Major major cities have seen unprecedented growth (of what? you need to specify! ) and have become...

Writing Feedbackmvettridumi - 08:14am
My family environment and it's affect on me. They have helped me to become who I am

3 - My family environment played a very big role in shaping me into the person who I am today. You...

UndergraduateZuneradumi - 08:11am
TOEFL: to be an expert in one field is not better than to have broad knowledge of many subjects

3 - As we know, people now face more and more competitions competition than before . If people want to win in these...

Writing FeedbackDearbhailSdumi - 08:08am
Toefl: people judge others by external appearance but is better also to consider the inner qualities

NEW - Hi, I need to find my errors in this essay.please help to find them. thank you in advance....

Essayshamedmas -
IELTS: The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items

4 - The pie charts indicate different percentages of expenditure on seven items in US from in 1966 to and 1996. You...

Writing Feedbackdigitalideadumi - 07:55am
IELTS - dramatic increase in the number of Japanese people travelling abroad - Bar chart, Line Graph

2 - This does not have adequate reference to the Japanese tourists to Australia .......... I know that is what you tried...

Writing Feedbackviolethoangdumi - 07:48am
TOEFL_inventors and science pioneers always try new things and take risks

1 - Throughout history, there have been many inventions and breakthroughs have invented made by brave persons. Well.......... your sentences...

Writing Feedbackmasih65dumi - 07:40am
Toefl: It should be mandatory for every company to substitute their old equipment with new ones.

4 - In the late 20th century, our wrong activities have ruined the environments Due to these incorrect manners (I prefer this...

Writing Feedbackhamedmaseddies - 07:10am
Contemporary life prevent people from developing into strong and independent individual - Gre Issue

NEW - Q. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and...
IELTS: Regulation regarding advertisements' unnecessary impact on people's lives

5 - to me your essay's structure is good, main points are developed very well as well as there're many good examples. it...

Writing FeedbackamalxavierPyon9x - 05:24am
scholarship request in manufacturing engineering - motivation letter draft

2 - i understand, but must i use some information from my CV in the motivation letter? or sending it with the letter...

ScholarshipAyman HussienAyman Hussien - 03:52am
"Do what makes you happy" - this is best piece of advice I have ever received

3 - Hi. Alas, English is not my first language, so I will try to comment from the position of pure logic. EF_Kevin...

Undergraduate2015seniorironhand - 02:30am
Parents teach their children the most important and necessary things; they are the best teachers.

5 - His/her life begins with the first teachers, who are parents A child's life begins with his or her's first teachers...

Writing Feedbacknasrullahjwajwa - 01:21am
Learn variety of cultures, traditions by engaging with local people and visiting historical places

NEW - When visiting foreign countries, visitors should take full advantage of learning the culture and traditions of that country. How can they...
TOEFL: Some students live in their hometowns, but others in different cities - which do you like?

4 - Well, you can include the full prompt in the post on top of your essay. Many other do that and...

Writing Feedbackkathytdumi - 12:41am
More and more people now choose to wear the fashionable clothes.

10 - The main reason of this is that wearing the fashionable garments can capture the attention of the general public,and thus people...

Writing Feedbacksundin928dumi - 12:25am
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