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"my passion for troubleshooting" - essay for TAMU

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Undergraduatesreeviksreevik - 03:20am

NEW - this is a very rough draft...this is my last essay and i just need help getting on track. ANY FEEDBACK IS...

Undergraduateciennalongwood -
I am aware that ASU expects very high standards from its students - evaluating my SOP

2 - Hi vangiespen, as you suggested ive made some changes, please check once... I need to finalize this ASAP.. Thanks so...

Graduatesunilzssunilzs - 02:56am
Describe a place or environment where you are perfectly content.

1 - A place where one is free from attack, a place where one experiences secure relationships and affirmation. It's a place where...

Essaystallbuttinydchege711 - 02:46am
Reckless drivers in United States threaten the lives of thousands of people every year

1 - On grammar, check your subject-verb agreement. "...causes for reckless driving is (are) similar to ones (those)...punishments such as fines and few...

Writing Feedbacksoriginaldchege711 - 02:22am
My Town

NEW - The man next to me violently puffs out clouds of smoke from his mouth like an overburdened locomotive. He silently chases...

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Essays for International Youth Camp on Anti-Corruption

2 - Dear Jamie, Thank you so much for giving me your best advice. I can get it :) And yes, after reading...

Scholarshipyukartiyukarti - Yesterday
People around me always consider me as a bird of a different feather. UC Prompt 1

7 - Thanks Louisa Mae! This has help me alot!

Undergraduatealan1213alan1213 - Yesterday
"What is success?" UC Personal Statement Freshman prompt

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world...

Undergraduatehtnguyen11 -
"Motivation and Passion" UC Personal Statement prompt 1

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your...

Undergraduateroxyparge -
Why would a global teaching model not work?

NEW - Hi, I'm currently writing an essay on education and how it shouldn't be the same in all over the...

EssaysJcatG -
Community Service Toy Drive and how it relates to who I am - UC Prompt #2

4 - Wrapping presents while listening to joyful Christmas music, in a warm room filled with friends, was something I would've never expected...

Undergraduatebryantasticcbryantasticc - Yesterday
'The hideous alarm sound woke me up' - Got Social Anxiety? UC personal statement 2

10 - Louisa, I made some changes. Can you please give me a critique? I focused more on my immigration experience...

Undergraduateyoyoproteinyoyoprotein - Yesterday
"My Life Incubator: Target" - Common App Essay Prompt 4

7 - - It is at Target where... Your essay has presented a side to you that could have been...

Undergraduatelantaylor13vangiespen - Yesterday
"The Code is Mightier Than The Pen" - NYU Supplementary Essay

9 - The essay looks as ready as it can be Lan. I believe that it is ready for you to use because...

Undergraduatelantaylor13vangiespen - Yesterday
I was like every child in my community

14 - If it is a scholarship personal statement that you are writing then yes, go ahead and beg. That is what a...

Writing FeedbackModewapvangiespen - Yesterday
''work is an anti node for poverty'' - My mother a supportive figure

8 - Thanks vangiespen :) . You're always amazing. More strength to the hands you use in typing. ;)

UndergraduateModewapModewap - Yesterday
People in my hometown always associate "project" and "project people" with hope of a better change

2 - vangiespen, thanks so much for your feedback. In fact, I am desparate in revising my SOP. Every time I read my...

GraduateThao NguyenThao Nguyen - Yesterday
The thief. He was a friend... a teammate... but he is an enemy now. College Essay 1

1 - Aaron, the point of this essay is to show how you deal with racial, cultural, and social differences. Although your story...

Undergraduateaggieswaggievangiespen - Yesterday
Big city have many entertainment centers, better learning conditions and more jobs there

3 - Then your essay should have a minimum of 50 words per paragraph. Try not to use word fillers like so, besides,...

Writing Feedbackpnthien2451vangiespen - Yesterday
Benefit to home country.....applying for scholarship

1 - You did not fully understand the requirements of the prompt. What you are being asked to state is a particular project...

Graduatehim827vangiespen - Yesterday
"Who drove them out to the streets?"

3 - The grammar you used in the essay is properly constructed in American English. The overall format is clean but too formal...

Writing Feedbackacc123vangiespen - Yesterday
My intended major - economy in Shanghai, China

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Undergraduateyoyoproteinvangiespen - Yesterday
My activity in Tourism Ambassadors, because I broke out of my comfort zone - Columbia Univ.

6 - great choice of words try to complete this in two or three para

Undergraduatemelramadhanihim827 - Yesterday
As a kid I was curious to know the source of sound from that radio - statement of purpose for Msc

6 - Start your SOP with answers to this very basic outline: 1. What field of study do you want to...

Graduatehim827vangiespen - Yesterday

1 - Amirul, your essay needs to become more coherent and relevant to the topic being asked. I developed a template for you...

Undergraduateamrlashrfvangiespen - Yesterday
What problem that students are facing with?

3 - Okay. I think you are not sure about the writing process involved in developing an argument essay. You need to understand...

Essayshunhannvangiespen - Yesterday
Debate Team that I built from scratch

2 - Thanks vangiespen! You're very helpful as always :)

Undergraduatemelramadhanimelramadhani - Yesterday
The world I come from : small city / digital world (please help me decide) - MIT

5 - Of the two essays you've written, I believe that the second one does a better job of answering the prompt. You...

Undergraduatemelramadhanibryantasticc - Yesterday
SOP for molecular basis of health and disease program at Columbia University

2 - Thanks for your comment! I've edited my SOP based on your advice. Looks better :)

Graduateonnuri2014onnuri2014 - Yesterday
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