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Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person's age.

2 - Hello, allow me to give you some feedback on your writing. 1. you need to include the topic of your writing?...

Writing FeedbackHelp4essaYAnfalia - 12:27am
A Noticeable Changing in Stokeford Town Between 1930 and 2010

2 - A few points; Para 1: As two maps have been showed concern about the proposed changes in one area, I suggest...

Writing FeedbackStacy Handayanieddies - Yesterday
"Pain or Glory" - 3 areas of improvement in my research paper

2 - Hi, misyoungblood. I'm going to work on the grammar/punctuation in your first paragraph: As between Which should prevail: a...

Research PapersmisyoungbloodChristineB - Yesterday
What other rewards for good work, apart from salary, are effective in encouraging further good work?

2 - Your essay is organized well, with an intro, two examples, then a conclusion. I think you should add another example...

Writing FeedbackIraj33EF_Carol - Yesterday
George Washington High School Drum Corps - personal quality, talent

3 - I think it's been a while since hahaha made that essay, lol. But good feedback!

UndergraduatehahahaDidgeridoo - Yesterday
The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity.

2 - This prompt has two questions to answer. Here I see you raise some issues to tackle the two tasks. Yet, your...

Writing Feedbacksiddiqumareddies - Yesterday
Information about changes in the developement of the Stokeford village during 80 years (1930-2010)

2 - Hello Mr. Iqbal, here I give some corrections on your writing. Meanwhile, in a particular location some building experienced a...

Writing FeedbackIqbalThemiStacy Handayani - Yesterday
Colour is a powerful tool that is used to great effect by manufacturers and retail companies.

2 - Hi Mr. Siddiq, your writing is excellent. however, I have some corrections, hope it is useful :) It is believed...

Writing FeedbacksiddiqumarStacy Handayani - Yesterday
Essay University of Les Roches Hotel management School, Characteristics of an efficient Manager.

3 - You ended your essay with a quote in lieu of a paragraph, and you have only two paragraphs in the body....

Writing Feedbacksylvia2626EF_Carol - Yesterday
Not every child needs to learn about music, art and drama - these are sheer hobbies, not subjects

2 - there are three main reasons to. Support this paradigm You need to outline these specifically, in the intro paragraph....

Writing FeedbackJake DoEF_Carol - Yesterday
IELTS TASK 2 : Sholud the media spend more time for reporting ordinary people lives

5 - Frankly, your idea in your essay is good. As far as I am concerned, you need to rewrite your introduction in...

Writing FeedbackalifIqbalThemi - Yesterday
How to minimize the levels of stress in high school students?

3 - To summarize, students should take breaks, do exercise and be able to control their diet. To make a conclusion, you...

Writing FeedbackKibaco15MuhammadImho - Yesterday
Question: some people think that it is best for extended families to live together

3 - Although I was raised grown up in an extended family I know the advantages and disadvantages of extended family, where we...

Writing FeedbackIraj33siddiqumar - Yesterday
Two totally different opinions about how we can prepare our kids to be good community members

8 - I watched some videos of the series " Ryan English". he said that for IELTS task 2 the minimum is...

Writing Feedbackromasalahromasalah - Yesterday
Two types of employees: long-serving employees and job-hoppers. Both have merits and demerits.

3 - Hiring good employees is important for what??? you have to explain the reason why this becomes important so that many employers...

Writing Feedbackkiwisuksiddiqumar - Yesterday
The greater number of the criminal cases which are perpetrated by young people below 18 year old

5 - good job

Writing FeedbackTriasIraj33 - Yesterday
Parents should describe healthy diet food and support their children to take exercises

2 - In modern life, children unhealthy lifestyle is considerably an accelerating trend. Instead, a school is not responsible, they just concern...

Writing Feedbackaseprudisiddiqumar - Yesterday
Although we cannot emit automobiles from our world, they work destructive for our quality of life

2 - The first paragraph did not introduce any value since sentences constructed bring lack of background information and weak thesis statement. A...

Writing FeedbackNapheddies - Yesterday
'Unwanted pregnancy' - essay about abortion.

2 - Hello, Dear Less than 1% of abortions done before 21 weeks of pregnancies end badly. There is a lot...

Writing FeedbackCountMaxMoreNaph - May 27, 2015
The effect of technology on the interaction between people

2 - hello you should not use negative word such as "Unfortunately" - In my own perspective,.. - doing ordinary activities...

Writing FeedbackromasalahNaph - May 27, 2015
"Field of specialization studied in the past" and field of study for MEXT 2016 scholarship

4 - Thanks for your help. I am now re-arranging it. But, what do you suggest about writing about Japan? What about...

GraduateVEGETAVEGETA - May 27, 2015
The globalisation may drive people away from their cultural identity like respecting older people

2 - Hello stacy, I like how you structured your essay and how clear are your ideas. I haven't noticed any grammatical error...

Writing FeedbackStacy Handayaniromasalah - May 27, 2015
Four different subjects which are attended by secondary school students from 2000 to 2009

2 - I hope you can make these changes. They will help your analysis and improve your writing. 1st paragraph: These...

Writing Feedbackaseprudilcturn87 - May 27, 2015
Medical Laboratory Technology - how to write "Field of specialization studied in the past"

2 - Hi, I would be glad to assist you. It seems as if you are studying for your master's degree. You should...

EssaysMAY PHOOlcturn87 - May 27, 2015
Market Share of Mobile Phone between Nokia, Sony, Samsung, LG, BenQ and Motorola

2 - There are only some slight changes that I have suggested. When you begin your analysis, I would describe it as...

Writing FeedbackTriaslcturn87 - May 27, 2015
Why do some students study abroad? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

3 - Hallo stevepham. I will give you some advice for your writing. 1. As far as I know, in academic...

Writing Feedbackstevepham707aseprudi - May 27, 2015
The high cost on keeping pets. It's a controveversial issue since some people are poor and starving.

4 - hallo alex, i have suggestion for you. - you should give scientific fact about this case, - you...

Writing Feedbackalexanjoualif - May 27, 2015
U.S. MAILING SERVICES HISTORIC COMPARISON

6 - hi asep, your analysis is good, i would suggest you to give comparison more.

Writing Feedbackaseprudialif - May 27, 2015
Why I want to Serve in the Peace Corps? Their service extends far beyond the works of a project.

2 - Hallo eos, I will give you some advice. As far as i know, it is forbidden to use abbreviation...

Scholarshipeosaseprudi - May 27, 2015
The role of universities in providing students with the proper education and consequently a good job

2 - Hi Romasalah, I would give some advice for your writing. As IELTS is academic writing, it is forbidden to...

Writing Feedbackromasalahaseprudi - May 27, 2015
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