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TOEFL TSK: The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts and uncles) is still important nowadays

4 - Hi, It's me, again. I just finish the rewriting and could not wait for you to help me make some...

Writing FeedbackCrystal812Crystal812 - 02:39am
Activity or employment opportunity / Queen's Commerce contribution / decision to persevere & to quit

NEW - QUESTION 1 Choose one extracurricular activity or one employment opportunity you have listed above. In 300 words, or fewer, describe...

Undergraduatekoalababy -
Reviewing an essay (rough draft) on Obesity in children and adults - research paper

NEW - On the bottom of the essay are areas of improvement that I have identified I need. Here is a grading rubric...

Research PapersPredators2016 -
An experience that taught you about yourself or the world... UBC Personal Profile (Computer Science)

3 - Hi Kingsley! Welcome to EF! Definitely agreeing with Louisa once again. This essay isn't really centered around the prompt- your overall...

UndergraduateNad720Hiddengrace - Yesterday
Personal essay---In the journey of life, time writes so many stories, so many characters emerge,

14 - When an essay is properly reviewed, restructured, and revised, the originally negative sentiments can be used in a proper manner, thus making...

UndergraduateSubhasisvangiespen - Yesterday
"The Real World" - Essay - agree or disagree whether parents are the best teachers or not

NEW - The first teacher we have in our lives in most cases are our parents. They teach us to walk, to speak,...

Writing FeedbackRachelG -
Personal Statement for LLM graduate to get a JD degree. Aiming at BU and BC.

2 - You have expressed your thoughts beautifully, and very expressively. Wish I could do the same. Anyway, here are my answers: 1. What...

GraduateScarlettwuRachelG - Yesterday
UIUC Transfer Essay - You have selected a second choice major. Explain your interest.

2 - 2. I have always known that I wanted a career which would allow me to create. : create what ? please...

UndergraduatewaqametuRachelG - Yesterday
Essay about young adults wanting independence and living alone or with their parents

NEW - Hi everyone! I am writing an essay on : Some young adults want independence from their parents asap. Other young adults prefer...

Writing FeedbackRachelG -
Explain unique aspects of your academic background or valued experiences you may have had

NEW - TOPIC: The statement of purpose will provide an opportunity to explain any extenuating circumstances that you feel could add value to your...

Undergraduateelizabethc -
If you get a chance to change something in my society which one you prefer ?

NEW - Everything in the world isn't stable and people know how much value transportation is in this changeable world. In my view, if...

Writing Feedbacksword_maruf -
Taiwan and the hidden talents. SoP- Applying for master program - Arts management, administration.

5 - Louisa, What you said is very pertinent, I just need someone like you, standing away to see how the mess I was...

Undergraduateeric41061eric41061 - Yesterday
Motivation Letter for CEMS-Master of International Management in University of Economics, Prague

NEW - Hi, I just finished my rough draft of motivation letter for a European business school(short as "VŠE"). However, the school of...

Lettersderek1993 -
I have graduated a Bachelor of Science in geology - INTERNATIONAL MASTER'S SCHOLARSHIP application

9 - Christopher, please refrain from using exclamation points in your essay. That is considered impolite in the academic world and shows a lack...

ScholarshipChristopherSvangiespen - Yesterday
Essay about Active Kids, Better Students

2 - Well, I major in Political Science, so I may not have a good command of your professional area. However, in order to...

Research PapersCEL623Crystal812 - Yesterday
Leadership, progress, and service during the past three years. Georgia Tech admission essay.

4 - Juan, when you are asked to represent 3 character traits in an essay, never, ever, make the mistake of presenting 3 separate...

UndergraduateJuanSebastianRvangiespen - Yesterday
How to write a short structured, autobiography - AppState Hayes Music School Essay

3 - Rebecca, you failed to mention where you come from in the first paragraph. That was the first required information in that paragraph...

Undergraduatemynormalfacevangiespen - Yesterday
What you would like to be for one day / Why Franklin & Marshall? F&M Supplements

5 - Calvin, both of your ideas would work well. However, I think that being a humanitarian aid worker would have more of an...

Undergraduateleesanity7vangiespen - Yesterday
At what age should kids begin their formal education: at four years old or 7 years old instead?

2 - Your passage is almost perfect. Could you pay attention to some details? It is true that education is one of...

Writing FeedbackMardy17Crystal812 - Yesterday
MS of Accounting/ Career path essay/Legal background

2 - Yongyi, there is nothing correct about the essay that you wrote. It does not reflect the response that the prompt requires. You...

GraduateScarlettwuvangiespen - Yesterday
One brush at a time. KGSP Introductory letter.

5 - Hello Again. It has been almost two days since i startet to re-think the main idea of my essay... I guess i...

Scholarshipjoshuagarcia91joshuagarcia91 - Yesterday
Prediction energy consumption in the USA since 1980 until 2030

6 - The line chart shows the number of forecastFORECASTING consumption energy by six different varietiesVARIETY of fuels in USA based (...) between 1980...

Writing FeedbackNiam01desgit33 - Yesterday
GeorgiaTech Transfer Essays (Civil Engineering)

9 - Hi WAQAMETU, Your essay looks better than the first draft. I will provide you with grammar and sentence structure help. ...

UndergraduatewaqametuJuanSebastianR - Feb 11, 2016
Motivation letter for Masters Program on Computational Mechanics

2 - You need to find a friend who is a native English speaker to edit for you! Get rid of the first...

GraduateuzbboyScarlettwu - Feb 11, 2016
"Education is not preparation for life. Education is life itself" KGSP Self-Introduction

3 - Hervin, thank you so much for your correction. it's very helpful.. Salam pemuda-pemudi Indonesia.. :D...

Scholarshipmonitadnmonitadn - Feb 11, 2016
By 2004, People preferred to buy more chicken than other meats. Fish and meat consumed - IELTS

7 - oh I see, thank you so much for the explanation. Now I know between the introduction and overview must be combined into...

Writing FeedbackHervinHervin - Feb 11, 2016
What challenge will you face when transitioning to college. What steps will you take to address it?

3 - Hi Ariel. Hmm... do you mind if I ask what this essay is for? Is it for a scholarship? I'm just not...

ScholarshipAvergaraHiddengrace - Feb 11, 2016
Attending university is very common nowadays. The reasons vary from people to people.

3 - The reasons vary from people to people. Some want to gain knowledge, some ... People have variety of reasons from...

Writing FeedbackameefuletraHervin - Feb 11, 2016
Is it better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects? Or the specialization has more value

2 - improved some of the grammar Within the last few decades, there has been an unprecedented development in the perception of education...

Writing FeedbackCrystal812waqametu - Feb 11, 2016
Aetas people. Transfer Essay Common App Prompt: provide a statement that addresses your reasons..."

5 - Thank you for your feedback, everyone! I really appreciate them. After seeing your comments, I agree that I need to focus on...

Undergraduatedaisyladdaisylad - Feb 11, 2016