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Issue 108/110 Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from

NEW - Could someone please judge my response to ISSUE 108/110? Some suggestions please! Thank you very much. Issue 108/110 Issue...

GraduateShepherdN -
'prosperous and perfect dream' - MS in Mechanical Engineering SOP

1 - In the first paragraph, you need not to states the fact the committee have already know. i think your should use...

GraduaterizuShepherdN - 10:31pm
"What do you want to become in the future?" Anything but Engineering

4 - Marky8, thank you so much for ALL of these sweeeeet grammar checks and comments! Yes they are definitely helping. You make...

Undergraduatedowotyyyyydowotyyyyy - 10:29pm
help me edit my Common App essay

NEW - Can someone edit my essay? I can email it to you if you leave your email down

Undergraduateyummydonut -
Accelerated Health Professions

1 - It wasn't until my second year of high school that I walked into the biology lab and knew that I wanted...

UndergraduateIHailedominic_jiang - 10:00pm
I'm stuck right now on 'Disadvantages Of Individual Sports' essay

1 - Advantages : you and your trainer can only focus on your own, you can fastly fix your lackness in sport. you...

EssaysVioletPerformeruci31 - 09:25pm
Rough Draft for Research Paper on Sex Ed!!

1 - Could you give me some details please? Is it persuasive, informative, etc.?

Research PapersolanieIHaile - 09:06pm
In personal live, we have some responsibilities towards other people (TOEFL)

1 - Overall, i think your essay is really good. But there are some points i don't think it fits in your essay....

Writing Feedbackgbekiluci31 - 08:47pm
consume the chemical food usually do by people from past time to nowadays, because organic vegetable

1 - Hy YULIS: I think you should avoid using word like bad, good, the best, etc in your essay......

LettersYULISMann_ms - 08:40pm
Title: there are many children in a family in the past. Which advantages or disadvantages outweigh.

2 - Hello... Allow me to rewrite; It seems a family with more children gain more benefits; however, I strongly believe...

Writing FeedbackanthonynguyenAnfalia - 08:25pm
From each organizations I joined, other members trusted me as a head of division in the organization

2 - thankyou so much for your help, anyway, is there anything i should add in my essay ? i am kind of...

Scholarshipuci31uci31 - 08:20pm
The Interrogation of The Good - Bertolt Brecht poem

1 - Great job here.. I'll suggest some options for possibly improving the clarity of the introduction. "The interrogation of the good...

PoetryjefincEF_Kevin - 08:19pm
College Essay - "Please, I need to go find my parents. My dad is looking for me"

2 - thanks! I really appreciate it

Undergraduate16chauc16chauc - 08:18pm
In the professional work life there is just one factor that motivates people - money

5 - you have three verbs but only one conjunction.

Writing FeedbackgbekilAnfalia - 08:15pm
It is believed by many that women should decide whether to have an offspring or not

2 - Hello.. overall, it's good essay. I suggest you to do not use the word of "kids" because it...

Writing FeedbackimonAnfalia - 08:03pm
Study without teacher? You should choose the right way which suits your learning.

2 - hello... ; the first letter should be capital. overall, you should separate...

Writing FeedbackKristy NguyenAnfalia - 07:53pm
Mankind nowadays face their natural enemy, nature. IELTS Writing Task 2

3 - many thanks to for you advice :) i can improve my writing skills..

Writing FeedbackWiratmaja_DickyWiratmaja_Dicky - 07:39pm
cover letter - theoretical physics

1 - I am interested i interest ## in applying for the graduate program at your institution and I'd like i...

Lettersaristotle89YULIS - 07:31pm
"Oh, you got that grade cause you're Asian" - Challenging a belief or idea

5 - Thank you so much! I definitely need to add more to the conclusion and change the passive voice....it's a bad habit...

Undergraduateestherhestherh - 07:22pm
IELTS - the level of education among women in the land experienced an upgrade

1 - The pie charts illustrate the differences of highest level of educated women in someland between 1945 and 1955, a period of...

Writing FeedbackmaritsanurYULIS - 07:21pm
Helping a Friend with Anorexia - UC Prompt #1/Cornell CALS Supplement

8 - I agree with the previous commentators that the essay should focus more around you. Your revision definitely has brought it closer...

Undergraduatedumbnerd123hmay - 07:02pm
Penn M&T Supplement Essay - Robotics, Business, and Engineering

NEW - I'm applying to a really selective program at Penn based around Management & Technology; it only accepts 50 people a year,...
"Taipei Tokyo, how can I help you" - Inside my parent's take-out restaurant - Common App

18 - No, he is not dead. He is alive but he is battling cancer right now. I was going to mention in...

Undergraduateorangecoolattaorangecoolatta - 06:01pm
The sights! The smells! The sounds! The atmosphere! - VCU admission essay

2 - Thank you!

UndergraduateAmirahxrAmirahxr - 05:58pm
Public speaking was never my forte. Disappointment and Failure of a school assignment.

3 - Hi Andrew, in answer to your question, yes, there are grammar corrections to be fixed in the essay and I marked...

UndergraduateHumanManvangiespen - 05:36pm
It all started with a joke - common app

11 - Fiona, the reason you need to delete the middle paragraph is because it does not help the essay along. You mentioned...

Undergraduatefionaleeeeevangiespen - 05:32pm
Almost dead - A ruff lesson

15 - Alina, rejection from colleges and universities does not always happen because of a lack of writing skills. There are other factors...

UndergraduateAlinaSkripetsvangiespen - 05:22pm
'I left my junior year confused, slightly out of touch with reality' - Mary Washington essay

2 - I think you have a great start , but I also believe that you should go further into why the institute...

UndergraduaterestinpizzaAmirahxr - 03:51pm
As I progressed through Fur Elise, I reflected on everything that had happened in the past months.

1 - Your topic is a little ambiguous. What was happening at the beginning of the essay? Maybe focus on a particular moment...

Undergraduatemayradio0508rarghal - 03:09pm
Legos -- MIT Significant Challenge Essay

1 - Hi Dibya! It's a very good essay. Through this essay I can see your interest on biology and your problem-solving...

Undergraduatedjgvoltdominic_jiang - 12:22pm
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